/ Fantasy / InHarmony
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Madness engulfs one, disconnecting from all.
Granting the one’s wish, it is uncontrolled, lurking in the beyond, bringing its dissonance, for the one’s wish wanted. Bringing it, all will shatter like glass, as if everything was nothing but just a bad dream…
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So far, is good. Just a little lacking in adding a sign like an exclamation mark or whatever it is in some dialogue. The plot is quite interesting for me. Most importantly, the description of the situation shouldn't be overlooked, but it certainly doesn't need to be as detailed. Because if not, then the reader will feel quite bored.Maybe that's all for me.keep it up, authors!
My only problem is the use of proper punctuations. Aside from that, it has potential... Too early to tell how this story will unfold so I probably go back if this story has more chapters.