Webnovel Author: Bankets - Novel Collection

Bankets

10mth

Replied to CkLance

Thank you. I know I'm being shameless, but can you tell me what you think about my story once you're done reading it?

For a moment the beast inside him started waking up,

I really don't want to open a harem here

Anime & Comics · Abhii_28

Bankets

10mth

Replied to Alex_Grable

Probably... but you amaze me. Of course I'm grateful, but you still reading this story?

ch 29 End of Chaos

The Third Prince

Fantasy · Bankets

Bankets

10mth

Replied to Bankets

If you like my comment, then how about you give my story a chance?It's still rough around the edges and it only has 29 chapters but you won't lose anything reading it. So please...

For a moment the beast inside him started waking up,

I really don't want to open a harem here

Anime & Comics · Abhii_28

Bankets

10mth

Replied to Dawniel_Aurelio

So, did I fail?

ch 27 Chaos (4)

The Third Prince

Fantasy · Bankets

Bankets

10mth

Replied to ShadowKatake

Just the first letter then. Please.

Ultimate System Creator

Fantasy · ShadowKatake

Bankets

10mth

Replied to Zelvron1604

Why ?

(Starting from now on, I will call the people who received the goddess blessings an 'Archon')

The Third Prince

Fantasy · Bankets

Bankets

10mth

Replied to ShadowKatake

Mind telling me what platform?

Ultimate System Creator

Fantasy · ShadowKatake

Bankets

10mth

Commented

ch 16 Akane Nanao (R18) Part 1

I really don't want to open a harem here

Anime & Comics · Abhii_28

Bankets

10mth

Commented

For a moment the beast inside him started waking up,

I really don't want to open a harem here

Anime & Comics · Abhii_28

Bankets

10mth

Commented

Akane Nanao (R18) Part 1

I really don't want to open a harem here

Anime & Comics · Abhii_28

Bankets

10mth

Posted

My only problem is the use of proper punctuations. Aside from that, it has potential... Too early to tell how this story will unfold so I probably go back if this story has more chapters.

I like the writing style. I'm not a genius but I can at least recognize that the grammar is almost perfect. Although, I think you should split some long paragraph into two to make it shorter and easier to read.I like the pace of the story either just giving me enough excitement to continue.I wish you upload more frequently.The first chap is kinda long tho, but it's manageable

This book has been deleted.

Bankets

10mth

Commented

Can't wait for the segs part

ch 15 Is this considered dating?

I really don't want to open a harem here

Anime & Comics · Abhii_28

Bankets

10mth

Commented

Ohoho. We all know where this is going

"Isn't that better?! Well, that's not what I meant,"

I really don't want to open a harem here

Anime & Comics · Abhii_28

Bankets

10mth

Commented

Just be a man. come on.

Mu Xiaoxiao fell into a battle between heaven and man.

I really don't want to open a harem here

Anime & Comics · Abhii_28

Bankets

10mth

Commented

Just go with the flow man.

'I have decided to be alone for the rest of my life, but now for what?'

I really don't want to open a harem here

Anime & Comics · Abhii_28

Bankets

10mth

Posted

I liked the story. It kinda surprise me because author told me it's romance. I didn't know it's dark romance.

Contract marriage: The Replacement Bride

Fantasy · Azure8090

Bankets

10mth

Posted

It's a good read however there is something I can't explain that it lacks.Maybe the writing style? I dunno myself.It has nice concept but maybe the delivery is bad.As for the update stability, the author ain't uploading for four months now so that's negative.All in all, the author said himself that he's a newbie so maybe in the future he will improve and make this story better