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Carmela Ken is the youngest among the Ken twins.
She is loved by all and provided with all she wants which is all a girl could dream of.
But sometimes kindness isn't really kindness as there could be more beneath the eyes.
Carmela is well aware of her dark family history but she sees looking into it as a waste of time as everything was just as she wanted PERFECT
while her family trie's their best to protect her from her own self unknown to her
Her perfect world comes crashing down the day she decided to take her sisters place on the alter thinking she was doing the right thing unknown to her that faith had different plans.
After moving in with her new husband she faces a lot of difficulties that could make one give up on living but she never backed down as she wanted to see the marriage through even if it wasn't one of fairy tale.
she sometimes woke up with her body being drained with a jug of water
while other times by a ugly looking monster straddling her while she makes a run for her life.
She so badly wanted to know who she was, what her destiny had install for her and why her life was in a perfect mess that she ended up walking right into the devil's trap.
will she be able to survive and stay alive for the remaining days of her life while being married to a demon like Zamiel Dean?
stay tuned.
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Extremely good story but the story is kind of fast paced which I like but it may not adhere to some people's expectations. The setting I can imagine but you can improve it more. This story is really great, and I would love to see more.
this is such a good book that I can't help but read it to the end. the writing quality is a little bit lucklustor not to mention the story development and characters designing. Everything is just flowing.✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️
The plot is interesting, I love this kind of story! But the writing quality needs to be improved. Not only grammar but pacing etc. Keep up the good work Author!
The story is alright and will really do better with an improved grammar. It is fast paced tho which I'm not quite used to but acceptable since it's only my preference. The twin's names can get a little confusing too especially the nickname, “Cal” which I assume would have been for Carlene but is actually Carmela's. In addition, not a popular opinion but author-sama should probably tweak your words here and there as everything felt like a brief passing moment even to the characters themselves. I kinda want it more dramatic and heavy. There's a spacious room for improvement and It makes me want to read on. You're doing good author-sama!
It has good plot and potential. Writing Quality - It good I didn't see any grammatical errors but one thing that bugged me was the pov changes in single chapter I have read my shares of novels in different pov but they at very least have one consistent like that of MC's. It's my own preference though. Story Development - The story is kinda fast paced you just can't miss the details. The twins names can confuse a little. But all in all it have great plot line. I will also prefer the chapter to be a little longer. Character Design - Really loved the twins but sorry I can't still bring myself to hate her sister. Rather I hate ML he is the reason for the drift or misunderstanding that might start between the twins in future Hate that happening 😞. Updating stability - You are doing good don't be pressured. Quality over quantity. World background - Normal modern rich family but grandpa kinda sus though.
Not bad and the concepts were interesting. It's just that the punctuations, grammar, and typos need to be improved so the experience isn't hindered.
The story is ok, because it feels poorly written dude to lack of lexical words. Author copy past the novel in gpt and tell it to make it better. I do the same thing.
The story is up to my liking. Though the writing itself is in shackles of typos and the writing style is in not so good state. Though it doesn't hindered me to read it! Loved it a lot. [img=faceslap]