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Alec found himself reincarnated into a world where magic reigned supreme.
He was initially confused by the turn of events, but little did he know that this was just the beginning of a much more extraordinary journey.
As fate would have it, he soon discovered that he was the illegitimate son of one of the most influential families in the capital, the Blaze Clan but His grandfather, taking on the responsibility, cared for him until he was old enough to embark on his path as a mage.
Ironically, Alec never truly grasped the significance of his family's ancient secrets, dismissing them as trivial.
However, everything changed when he awakened his dormant system and gain abilities that made him unique.
From that moment on, he dedicated himself to becoming one of the world's most renowned mages, all while working towards fulfilling his grandfather's unfulfilled aspirations and carrying on the golem mages' legacy.
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The story is interesting, but you hit a paywall way too quickly for how low quality the spelling and grammar is, and for how short the chapters are.
You might've locked the chapters but there's no way I will be paying for this garbage grammar. I will of course read it for free. You might want to hire an editor tho...
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The story itself is okay, the only thing that is holding it back is the grammar. it's like mtl hahahaha
Great premise excited to see where it goes I’m a binge reader so I don’t usually continue after the free chapter until we get to 500 plus and then I read about every 500 or a 1000 chapter until complete I would highly recommend Grammerly! The free version, if you go back and put every chapter through it you should be able to fix a ton of critics opinions of the book❤️😇
the story, characters, and world seem interesting. it's just difficult to see it under the mountain if grammatical mistakes.
Garbage grammer and spelling. pay wall way to early to really determine if it's worth the money no really world building
Author your ideas and conyepts are really good and unique in this novel but maybe its because of grammar or those weird mix words that disrupts the pace and likeness of this novel.
i haven't even read it but the absolute lack of grammar in the synopsis tells me how this story will be and i can see a disregard for grammar
Writing at the start is rough , really rough. Stuck through it as there are edits here and there that hint at better writing to come. What killed it for me though was the character progression. Just jumps all over thr place and really killed the enjoyment for me. I really wanted to like this book as the premise seems great but the execution really doesn’t make this worth reading. And certainly not worth using stones on.
Not an exceptional story, just average. Do give a try and see if it’s upto your taste.
The grammar can be fixed and I can look around it due to the story being good!
I feel the same as many reviewers. It’s a fun story but the grammar is not good.
interesting storyline with some interesting characters. i continue to read for now .
bad translation is real. Unless you want to use additional mind powet to understand each chapters.also, author in 200 chapters seems like rushing.
It's an interesting story, world, and magic. It's just the absolute lack of grammar, and many sentences make no sense. Also, the pay wall is way too early, especially for the quality and length of the chapters. The characters are decent, but half the time, you can't understand their intentions or emotions because of the poor writing.