Dragon ball : Echoes of the Void

LV 12

Ashlin_17

Author Review: Hello, dear readers! As the author of this thrilling narrative, it's only natural that I hold it in the highest regard. I'd like to share with you some compelling reasons why I believe you will find this story to be an exceptional experience: 1. A Unique Narrative Structure: Contrary to the popular tropes of system-based narratives or harem elements, this story stands apart. 2. A Nod to Dragon ball Fans: If you're a fan of the Dragon ball series, this fanfic has been crafted with you in mind. While the story stands on its own merit, it pays tribute to Dragon ball. 3. Faithful to Dragon ball Lore: The story maintains integrity to the original Dragon ball lore, honouring the unique essence that has enamoured millions worldwide. 4. A Balanced Hero: Despite his formidable abilities, our main character won't be immune to setbacks. He experiences growth, challenge, and evolution, appealing to readers who appreciate a realistic trajectory of character development. 5. Emotional Depth: This isn't just an action-packed tale. It's a journey that delves deep into the emotional landscapes of the characters, making them as relatable as they are exciting. 6. Rich World Building: The story is set in a well-detailed universe, with dedicated arcs to expand and explore the various world, enhancing the reading experience. 7. Quality Writing: As an author, I take pride in delivering a well-written narrative. While occasional grammatical errors may occur, they are few and far between, ensuring an enjoyable read. 8. A Well-rounded Love Interest: Our protagonist isn't just chasing after a hollow romantic trope. His love interest is a fully developed character who contributes significantly to the plot, steering clear of the clichéd background or merely sexualized roles. 9. Respectful Relationships: Rest assured, the relationships in this story are founded on respect and mutual consent, steering clear of questionable dynamics often found in fanfics. 10. I value my readers' opinions and am always open to constructive feedback and plot suggestions. I encourage you to give this story a fair chance. Read a good chunk (at least 15 chapters) before making up your mind. I believe you will find yourself immersed in a narrative that's both respectful to the Dragon ball universe and engaging . Happy reading! Ashlin_17

LV 1

Dem_11

This is a spoiler-free review, as there is no point in me spoiling a story. It is worth mentioning that I have noticed some readers giving negative reviews based on their personal preferences not being fulfilled, such as wanting a harem or a cold-blooded protagonist who wins every fight. However, I believe in providing an honest review based on the story as it is. It is important to appreciate the author's creative choices and the unique direction they have taken with their narrative. Anyways here is the review: The quality of grammar in this fanfiction is commendable. Throughout the story, I have noticed very few grammar issues, and even where they exist, they are minor and do not hinder the overall reading experience. In fact, the grammar is superior to that of 90% of the fanfictions I have come across. The author's attention to detail and commitment to maintaining grammatical accuracy is truly praiseworthy. Regarding updates, the story has been consistently updated in its earlier stages, which is highly appreciated. However, due to the longer chapters, averaging around 3000 words, I would personally be satisfied even with two chapters per week. The author's dedication to providing regular updates, considering the length of each chapter, deserves recognition. In terms of story development, it is still too early to make a definitive judgment. However, in the earlier chapters, the author has effectively laid the groundwork for future story points and character development. This foreshadowing adds an intriguing layer of anticipation for what lies ahead, and I look forward to seeing how these hints unfold in the narrative. Character design is well executed, although not without room for improvement. The main character, Renji, is relatable and far from being a generic, dark and edgy character. He possesses a sense of humour while maintaining clear goals and a distinct personality. This nuanced portrayal adds depth to his character, making him engaging and likable. Regarding the world background, as this is set in the Dragon Ball universe, the author has hinted at a more expanded storyline beyond what we were shown in the original series. This expansion of the Dragon Ball world presents an exciting opportunity to explore new dimensions within the established universe. In conclusion, this fanfiction shows great promise. With its strong grammar, regular updates (considering the chapter length), hints at future story points, well-developed characters, and an expanded world background, it is a fanfiction that holds the potential for an immersive and captivating reading experience. I would like to commend the author and wish them good luck with their story. I look forward to reading their future works and leaving another review. Honest feedback and encouragement can go a long way in supporting an author's growth and creativity.

LV 4

Nob7

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Even though the novel is still in its early stages, I've been enjoying it. The main character is relatable rather than the stereotypical cold, gloomy type, which is refreshing. While the story is still in its early stages, it appears the author intends to expand the Dragon Ball universe with new topics. The speech flows naturally, and the grammar is impeccable. Regular updates are a good indication, and I'm looking forward to more.

I highly recommend this fanfic, as it has been an incredibly enjoyable read for me. The conversation is well-written and avoids the problems of cringe-worthy writing thanks to excellent grammar. The updates have been steady, and I want they will keep arriving without pause. The story strikes a perfect pacing balance, neither rushed nor slow, and the action sequences are better than 80% of other fanfics. The main character is a breath of fresh air, deviating from the typical archetypes that plague dragon ball fanfics. While the world-building is still developing, it's clear that the author has plans to expand the Dragon Ball universe with new themes. In summary, this fanfic is a must-read, offering excellent grammar, comprehensible dialogue, consistent updates, exciting action, and a relatable protagonist.