/ Realistic / 26th March
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Well the story is okay but you need to work on your writing skills. Upload the next chapter as soon as possible. Work on your writing and word selection and then publish plus you need some editing in this chapter too. Edit those and republish.
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Well the story is okay but you need to work on your writing skills. Upload the next chapter as soon as possible. Work on your writing and word selection and then publish plus you need some editing in this chapter too. Edit those and republish.