Monkey King in Marvel

A contradictory read if I have seen any. This is probably one of the good examples of "You can't please everyone". And I'm certainly far from being pleased. But anyways, I'm by no means representative of anyone but myself and my own personal views/opinions. Details:_________________________________ Writing Quality(4.5/5): Tbh one of the better written ones on the platform. There isn't much I can fault on, that won't be subjective and full of my personal biases. Hence I don't think I can add much to this endeavour. ________________________________________ Story Development (2/5): Maybe it was wrong of me to review it with only a few chapters released(Somewhere around 20). But as of this moment the story is totally all over the place. Some actions of characters seems to hold no logical reasons whatsoever. There's a self imposed need of showing mystery that in my opinion is not helping the case of this particular piece. The main character is nowhere an underrated one, most if not all of the people are aware of the Monkey King's story. Adding that name and him as a protagonist in this fic I thought there need not be too much mystery involved. People who loved him came here to see his pure unadulterated chaos and mischief. But it's preference and in no way represents the entirety of the reader base. ________________________________________ Character Design(2/5): Character design is bad in my opinion. But before some eager youngun keyboard warrior well versed in the dao of all writing decides to school me for my heresy, I appeal you to indulge in my reasoning. As previously stated the MC is a well established character. His is a story of many things but I presumptuously assume that the most impact was his aspect of redemption. It was after that the character became likable to me(to may I'd assume but I could be wrong). So ripping him off of his universe at the end of his saga and then forcing him to degrade to a maniac level just because you want your own character development saga is not really appealing to me. I'm not a huge fan of nerfs, but this instance I could get over that, what bothers me tho, is that his character has been reduced to a maniac ruthless killer with no remorse, an unrepentant, petty bundle of confusion which makes his current character arguably worse than the one he had at the very beginning of his journey. So I do not think the author did justice to the Monkey King's character. Don't get me wrong, it can be a good character development story and that is great. Just imo, it was an unnecessary and forced character development that required you to degrade a well-rounded good character. Then there are other characters. I don't know about others as the opinions of the 5 star reviews do clash with mine but when it comes to certain characters's from X-Men's side, they seemed more like 1 dimensional characters to me. Whereas there seems to be more effort put in their counterparts. So there's this glaring undertone of plot being forced, whereas a subtler tone would've been more useful for the fic is what I believe. But once again, all of these are just personal opinions. ________________________________________________________________________________ Updating Stability(5/5): I'm still conflicted about the earlier ratings on SD & CD. And I'd not like to take the ratings down even more demotivating the author as I do feel the author has a talent for writing, and my own concerns are full of biases. So, full score here. ________________________________________ World Background(3/5): It's just been only so so chapters. Even though my review is fully filtered through my own lenses I still hope it serves some purpose to any potential readers hence I can't in good conscience judge the world building with only this much. So a decent 3/5.Overall: I'm at an impasse on whether to recommend it or not. And I have explained my reasoning for that already. With an unsure tone I'd urge every reader to give it a try for the first 5 chapters at least. If it does not look good to you then it doesn't improve much in the next 20 or so chapters. But if it does then good for you, coz I have a hunch that this one will be a long one if it is not dropped.

I'm loving this so far i want him to smack the baldy in the face so bad though. Just hope he is not going to limited by a group or anything. Mc has a personality type that i like. He just does things in order to fulfill his goals. Selfish is the way to go for this mc and i am loving all of it.

Me gusta el desarrollo del personal qué sea así agresivo sin control después va cambiar lentamente de doy un 7/10 .