Villagers in Mushoku Tensei

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lapluiearrive

Hello, it's the author here, shamelessly commenting on my own story :) The regular release schedule for chapters is usually 1 or 2 per week, but there may be exceptions. I hope you'll enjoy the story !

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Franco_Veliz_2160

The story is perfect but it only has one problem, the updates are slow but it's really not a big problem since every chapter that comes out is perfect.

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_Wessix4Ever

the story is alright but the grammar really hurts it maybe try to find an editor or use something like grammarly

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Fisherman_Dream

Okay, I'm very interested in Moshuco Tensei fanfic, hopefully the protagonist can avoid the problems that will follow, and will there be romance? If not, with whom?

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Yugi_Yugi

Great all of it the best if you don’ mind waiting a little than this is for you (the reason why you need to wait is because the author is making this for fun and thing like that)

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Mysteries_

This is quite a find, I swear I tried really hard to find any flaws in this story but I couldn't, the writing is very pleasant, this author is very talented and has great taste. Praise the Fool!

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Darkiling

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hey dude, I really like your story it's a interesting book, I know you doing this because you're bored but I hope you don't drop 🤞, but I really hope the love interest is sylphy if not I hope they become good friends, that is all keep up the good work you have my power stones and I hope you have a very good day.

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Hephaestu

Mega fajne do czytania oby twórca dokończył pisanie :) Bo szkoda nie dokończyć ma potencjał pfffff pozdro i miłego czytania nauraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Darkiling

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General_Frozt_8890

really good fanfic, they don't make the mc too strong, but they don't make him defenseless, and they give him room to grow in strength.

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_DEKIM_

really noisy.meh😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

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Darkiling

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FandomExplorer_2nd

Hey... I have not read it yet but... i have a question is that a GUN behind the MC (I just assumed that was the mc look) well guess ill read it to find out

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Darkiling

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