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Nothing bounds me!
If I lack something its not because that's my fate,but rather I simply do not desire it
I possess what I have not as a consequence of fate but merely because of my own desires and efforts. Nothing is predestined in my life; I exist beyond the realm of fate and destiny.
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In the aftermath of the enigmatic Arcane Reversal, an epochal event that bestowed the realms of magic and cultivation upon Earth, we find ourselves immersed in a tale that unfolds years later. Embark on this journey alongside Aei, a resolute young boy who staunchly rejects the very notions of fate and destiny. Little does he realize, however, that despite his unwavering disbelief, the intricate tapestry of fate ceaselessly weaves its threads, deftly manipulating his path at every turn.
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Author here. All your reviews are welcomed. Will be uploading a chapter every day. Please give it a good review and rating you like it. Thanks!
Arcane Reversal is a very interesting read, though only 3 chapters, I can see the promise already forming. Our main character, Aei, is learning he has magical powers and can cultivate. His world is expanding and changing rapidly. It will be interesting to see how he uses his abilities in the upcoming chapters.
Heyo, reading Arcane Reversal, I have to admit that the author is good at characterization and dialogue. The characters don't talk like robots and I feel that immerses you into the world the author built. However, I think Arcane Reversal is a case of a diamond in the rough and that's a good thing, as the author can refine it further.First, although the author's descriptions are good, I think improvements can be made in punctuation, quotes and dividing paragraphs. It would be much more neat if the author could space the full stops and commas correctly. The paragraphs should also be divided into at most five sentences in each, too long and it becomes a text wall.Try best to format sentence quotes into single sentences as well Author, it helps the reader process it more easily plus it lets you insert some descriptions and actions in between lines. Even with all this, Arcane Reversal has good potential and I do recommend you read and support the author!
This is a very good novel, it's very descriptive and I like where the plot is going, keep it up brother and add more depth in your work....!!!👍
Wow, interestingly, I never thought it would be, I recommend this book to everyone, please read it and thank me later.
Overall, this story could use an overhaul in its presentation. Before any more chapters are released, the author should go through and edit the current ones. Most of the paragraphs are too long, and they run together.The world building also could use more work. I believe the pacing going forward should be tweaked a bit more in order for the story to flow better. It isn't living up to its full potential, so it's an average story.
Haha! This author is quite humorous. I really look forward to seeing the rest of the story. Please author work hard cause this King is quite impatient
"The author only has 4 chapters released so far, but it's showing a lot of promise! Sure, there were a few minor grammatical errors, but they didn't really get in the way of my reading. One thing that might help is breaking up the paragraphs to make the reading flow even smoother, espeically after the dialogues. I absolutely loved the prologue; it really helped me get a feel for the world where Aei lives. Your storytelling is definitely comming along, and I'm digging the way you're building up the plot. It's got that perfect pace that makes me want to know what happens next. Keep doing what you're doing!"
This is a great story with some interesting environments, despite its grammar issues. Other than that, I would definitely recommend people to start reading it.
One thing that I do like is how the main character really develops in how their world changes and what comes of them. It's super interesting, and it's one that you'll definitely revisit.
I loved the beginning really hooks you into the story I hope for updates in the future [img=update] [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I think it's not a good thing to run the race of collecting ratings when you have only 6 chapters. This will ruin your chance of getting honest ones. Good things come with patience. First, the paragraphs were huge and you will lose your reader that way. You can mark my word. Yesterday I started reading but the moment I saw big huge paragraphs, I immediately dropped it and moved on. Why? It was at the end of the day, and I was feeling sleepy. How many of your potential readers will still return after a good night's sleep? If they don't come back how would they know how good your story is!! You have a good writing quality. I may have a beef with the size of your paragraphs, but that does not mean that I don't appreciate your storytelling ability. It's GOOD! The story promises a gripping development. I feel the excitement in the air. In recent years, we have seen many movies and dramas like this. Like Divergent series, Under the Dome, Silo, etc. I feel the same vibe from this story...Keep up the good work!! Who know, you can get a movie contract you can pitch it well to an agent!!
This is an interesting novel which mixed sci fi really well. Would like to read more chapters to know more about the story and where it is heading.
It's a story with potential! I don't usually read books of this genre but recently I have decided to try new things so I picked this up. The story is good and I enjoyed reading it. Eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters,
Good job write this novel. The author know how to bring the enjoyment. Try it and you will understand why i write this review..you will not regret it
This book is a good read, the narration is well written and grammar is okay^^ though I'd like to suggest to put some break in some paragraphs that's more than a page long, nice story🙌🙌
Author here. I will be uploading a chapter everyday at 4 pm GMT. Please add to your library and gimme a good review if you like it. Arigato-Thanks!