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Start of story is very promising. If you have read other books by the author, then you will find the same great humorous banter. For people that have not read authors books then you will often times experience huge laughs in the otherwise nicely built cultivation world. For now the MC's are similar yet different from "Death and me" MC's.
The first chapter immerses the reader in a serious and dense atmosphere, leaving them intrigued about the direction the story will take. However, by the end of the second chapter, the narrative takes on a fun tone. As the plot progresses, the madness intensifies - and this, in the best possible way. This book promises to be a promising read. I recommend everyone to give it a chance, especially if you're looking for something fun and different, with an intriguing blend of familiar elements and unexpected surprises.
So funny! I had my doubt after the first chapter since it looked somewhat dark at first. However, it soon changed from two onwards. I just feel like the cover truly doesn't depict the story well. Where is my chubby MC?! Anyway, it is truly worth a reading.
I'm here because author said in discord it is very similar to his death book yet different. Indeed, he didn't hold back on the comedy, and they are just as funny as rean and roan's antics. kkkkworth give it a try.
This is an absolute great read. 🥰✨❤️I love the suspense and everything this book does to my emotions. Good job, author✨❤️
Another great novel within the eastern cultivation genre by our loving author, Suiyan. Definitely a nice read. 10/10 would recommend.
I've been really enjoying the story so far. Suiyan is one of my favorite authors. I loved reading wisp, death and me, and everyone has a crown. This story has hooked me just like those
So, there doesn't seem to be a very detailed review so far, so I'm going to take this role. :D1- About the background, I don't remember to have seen a story where an entire universe was controlled by a single being. The MC, obviously for the sake of the plot, just so happens to be the only one free from that 'Queen's' influence. 9/10 there. It feels interesting.2- The world background follows your normal cultivation Universe... Until the systems activates! Yes, there is a system. From the looks of it, when it activates, it teleports the MC to other universes with different laws, rules, environments, etc. Simply put, this is a key content that allows the author to bring infinite numbers of environments. 10/10 there.3- Updating stability is what you would expect. Two chapters/day, and the occasional mass release. I wonder if there will be rewards and things like that.4- The development of the story seems to be going at a steady pace, it is not fast, nor is it too slow. Personally, I would like less darkness, but the comedy is very good and lightens the content. 8/105- As for writting quality, I haven't seen any glaring mistakes so far. But then again, with ChatGPT nowadays, authors will only post huge mistakes if they are lazy to use it. 10/10 until now.Well that's more or less it. I like the story, the comedy, and the development, so I'll continue to read and come back later to update it if necessary.
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If it’s Suiyan, you know you in for a laugh! He wrote Death and me and Wisp… it was all funny! Let’s get this started
The first chapter was a bit confusing to fully grasp what was happening. There was a sense that the narrative was telling the story of three distinct characters. However, as you progress in the reading, it becomes evident that these characters are, in fact, different stages in the life of the same protagonist. Over time, the plot becomes more engaging, revealing itself as a work that blends humor, unexpected twists, and at the same time, a sense of familiarity.
I found the main characters really good, especially enjoyed the comedic moments. Bruno is a former villain, more inclined to be considered an anti-hero. He tries to act cleaner, but sometimes his true nature surfaces. Also, it seems like he's not very comfortable trying to be good, providing many moments where he says things with a weird double meaning :D On the other hand, Alm is someone entirely devoted to evil, not caring about anything or anyone to achieve his goals. He's an exaggerated embodiment of some main characters from other books. Despite being the tougher and more impermeable one, the circumstances of his past hit him at his weak point :D In the end, the more wicked of the duo is the one with a more protective side and spares no effort to protect his own. The duo consists of two ancient beings leaning towards evil, finding themselves starting from scratch, and the knowledge of the past hardly helps. With a lot of comedy and blood (which I love :D), it's a 10/10 book.
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Incredibly funny, I can't even believe it turned out like this after the first chapter. The interaction between the two MC's and the misunderstandings they keep getting with Ruri and the others is just hilarious! I'm just somewhat confused about the cover as it doesn't really depict the real thing. Oh well, keep it going!
Well, basically here to say I'm laughing a lot, so I even bough a castle. If the author can keep me laughing while progressing the story interestingly, I'll continue to support this book. That's all. o/
Not the type to do very big reviews, so i'll make it short. Above all, it is funny. I love some comedy, and author doesn't fail to make me laugh; The story, too, seems very interesting with the queen conception. Anyway, keep it up.
I must confess that initially, I wasn't very interested in books with a focus on comedy, and I only thought about reading the first few chapters to pass the time. However, this book really hooked me after a few chapters. The story centers around the mental evolution of a protagonist who, at one point, was a classic bloodthirsty villain, a type commonly seen in many literary works. He had his reasons for becoming that way, but it's clear that nothing justifies his past actions. In the end, comedy became just a light element that doesn't compromise the narrative development. As the story progresses, the character begins to connect with others and learns to trust, realizing that he doesn't have to face everything alone. Of course, there's also room for romance, but it develops slowly. In the end, I suggest giving the free chapters a try, as they set the tone for the rest of the story. However, it's in the third volume that things start to evolve toward a narrative more focused on action and adventure, which, personally, is something I appreciate more.
I deeply appreciated the way the story started with the premise of transmigration, an element often explored in a predictable manner, but in this case, it was presented in an original and non-clichéd way. The beginning of the narrative captivated me as it delved into the complexity of the protagonist, exploring a dualism that reminded me of Hide's intriguing story. This parallel between the characters added a layer of depth to the plot, making it even more captivating and unique. I look forward to discovering how this dualism will evolve throughout the story and influence the protagonist's choices. It's an aspect of the plot that truly captivated me from the very beginning!!!!!
The story seems very interesting. First time seeing a novel where everyone is controlled except the MC. Seems a uphill fight and the comedy did crack a few laughs from me. Keep it up.
This book is highly recommended for those who enjoy classics in the cultivation genre, featuring a unique personality and innovative elements. The protagonist, once powerful, is forced to start anew in a new location due to adverse circumstances. His prior knowledge provides only minimal assistance, as the rules in this new place are at higher levels, making things considerably complex. The world is filled with mysteries that unfold with each arc, revealing a fascinating overall panorama. The story's development offers a captivating blend of action, battles, and even a touch of comedy among them. The characters play their roles well, with initially well-defined personalities that evolve over time as they learn from their mistakes. The romance, while seeming established from the beginning, provides an enjoyable journey as it tracks the development of the relationship, although I wish the progression were faster :P
As always, here comes the shameless author's review. Well, for those who read my other books, you can expect a lot of comedy. Sure, the first chapter is kinda dark, but it is only to set up the story beyond. From the second onwards, the light environment takes place, and the adventure starts for real. There will be no Harem, and you won't find that every pebble on the side of the street has a Chinese name, either. I mean, it is literally another universe, so how can everything have Chinese names? It makes no sense! Hahaha! Anyway, I hope you enjoy it.