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a brilliant engineer dies in our world but the HIM in alternative world gets his memories and some perks. what will the new improved him do in this world?!.
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this is my first time writing, so be lenient and let me know what you think.
i also do not own anything besides my MC and some characters i will introduce later, and also some new plots in future. this is gonna be like a long novel. hope you're ready
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this is a very interesting story I hope it continues it has many avenues to explore
after reading the first 16 chapters I am now going to make an objective review: it is very poorly constructed, we go from a guy who knows nothing to do except say that he is 23 years old and that he is tired of it where he is a guy who is happy to be where he is suddenly we don't really know why he becomes happy. we go from a guy who has almost no powers to a guy who does, then to a guy who has powers and knows how to use them and we never get any explanation of how that happens. without forgetting that the hero is over 27 when he arrives at school, and that he will start going out with 17 year old girls, well done.
The story is light and easy to understand. Indeed, the pace of the narrative is a bit slower, but perhaps that's one of the novel's strengths. In terms of writing quality, it's well-organized and varied. The only drawback might be the scarcity of dialogue in some parts, and perhaps each chapter feels a bit quiet or lacking in excitement, but that could be due to the limited number of chapters. Overall, it's good.