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The world is now, again, in a world war.
All countries are fighting over a chain of islands, globally known as the 'Chain of Time'.
These islands are said to hold secrets that have been lost... but they also hold more enemies than usual.
Arath, a US Marine, has been sent along with 48 others to assist Lieutenant Edmond, and take control of Prisca Island.
Nobody in this world knows that the Chain of Time is sentient...
And it doesn't like intruders.
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Arath is a very interesting the character.If this is how four chapters is. I am excited for more. The writing is easily readable and nice. Am hooked. Keep it on
3 chapters in, I genuinely enjoyed the story. There are no mistakes in writing, so there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s really good and I took a liking in Arath, he is a well written character. Recomend 10/10!
Pterosaurs!! Arath seems to be a little small but fierce lol. The writing quality is good and although I still don't know how the story will progress, I will wait for more chapters. Definitely a good read! Good job author :D
Five star review for my own story XD Anyways, for those that look at reviews, Prisca Island is the result of thinking about a story based around Jurassic Park and something like Predator (1987) :D It will get better as I go! Please believe that!
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Hello, hello, alright. So far, war and military isn’t one of my go-to genres but it’s great to explore things. One thing I noticed is the sudden insertion of character descriptions in a fast-paced scene of aircrafts—you know, the usual military footage stuff. I suggest describing the action-packed moment so I can feel like I’m in the scene, or that I can imagine it a little further. The pacing is way too fast, so I guess I forgot there’s some stuff going on xD Another thing I noticed is the sudden change of scene which is understandable because of the divider, but I suggest describing how the scene led to the Sinraptor (?). You can introduce it in more detail, and show us how it plays a role in the story more! There’s not much content since each chapter is 400 words. I suggest 1,000-2,000 words per chapter. It makes things look professional and more presentable to the reader. Overall, your story is pretty good, you just need to hone your abilities in describing scenes further. Good luck!