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Savannah Marley is often bullied for being a social recluse but when she starts developing unexpected sexual feelings for her bully, secrets begin to unfold and a whole new world opens up before her. A world were men turn to wolfs and a select few possess the power to will, but with this discovery comes danger and she must make some hard decisions to protect the people she cares about.
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A good start. The feelings of the characters are brought out really well. I could understand their relationship and their feelings towards each other because of author-san's precise and efficient writing style...this has a lot of potential!
It's a pretty interesting story. I just want to suggest being mindful on the spacing. It's better to split up the paragraphs. It's a little heavy on the eyes to read a full-length document and other readers might feel bored on that so it's better to edit those parts and avoid it in the future chapters. Anyway, kodus!
So far, it is a good read. I love the narrative and the story plot. This book has potential, and the fact that you can make us feel what the characters are feeling is a nice way to write a story. However, you could do well to space your paragraphs for easier reading.
The story follows Savannah, a social recluse, as she navigates a world filled with secrets, unexpected desires, and supernatural elements. The author's style shines through in their ability to create a sense of intrigue and mystery. However, there's room for further character development and exploration of the supernatural aspects to enhance the storytelling. The potential for an engaging narrative is evident in these initial chapters. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. 😁
The writing is good overall but there is some formatting in terms of spacing that could be improved. Updates are consistent and the characters are made well but the tale really doesn't explain what these characters look like or much about their background. With that being said, story background isn't a major necessity due to this type of tale. Fun and enjoyable read overall even though I can't say I'm all with the decisions characters make in this tale. I know context is a thing, but I'm not really given a good context to understand why they do some of these things. To the writer, I welcome you to read and analyze my fanfic "Avatar: Lingering Tensions". It is a sequel to "Avatar: Macai's Journey" however, reading the 1st chapter of AMJ could give you some basic context if you are unfamiliar with the storyline.
This is a thrilling and emotionally complex narrative that explores the depths of desire, secrecy, and the difficult choices one must make in the face of danger.
The writing quality, I'm sad to say, is kind of bad. It's mainly punctuation, but there are some grammatical mistakes. Fix those, and this would be a good read for fans of this type of book :D
The book is intrigue , following our FL close up...given the detailed way of writing . The writing style is fine , few things to fix here and there .The author piqued my curiosity about the relationship between the main character so ....I am waiting for more !Keep up the god work !