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Primordial Shadow: Dungeon of Eternal Darkness
4.64 (18 ratings)
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"Amid darkness, there is only more darkness. Either you were born into the light or forced to suffer for all eternity."
Austin never expected anything good from his life that was shrouded in poverty and abandonment. He was an unwelcomed Soul navigating in a world devoid of mercy.
However, when his miserable life finally changed for the better, tragedy struck, he was killed and forced into a void of darkness, left to suffer. As if Fate was not finished toying with his Soul, he was given a glimmer of light amidst the darkness, he was chosen to save a world that would soon face destruction. Reborn into a world of swords and magic as the Progenitor of the Night Elves, Austin, now renamed Nyx, must traverse a world that contains Beings with unimaginable Power. Follow Nyx along his journey from a naive, crazy, and untrusting infant plagued by his past to an overpowered omniverse ruling nepotist.
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Okay, this book is surprisingly very good . Although the chapters aren't much but still i had a pleasant reading experience. there's little to none punctuation mistake and grammatical error and the character design is simply amazing. Still, I wish there were more chapters to read because a harem novel with a protagonist having shadow abilities sounds amazing
Just wanted to give a review. have not read it but will keep it in the library to read later. Also nice pic and good luck..............
A good story with nice pacing. It would be best if there were more chapters. Characters are well-designed. The plot is interesting, Good luck author.
You know i love me a great story. Man, this is quite the stuff I can literally see myself as the main character. I don't give this. out often You get a 5 star
I don't actually know how to put it in words so just take this!!! 🤯- mind blowing. 😎- cool. 🧐- interesting. and many more, just try to find it yourself. but I will say one thing you will not regret reading it.
I really like it so far, it is detailed just about enough in my opinion, and I already like the MC despite us only seeing a little of his crazy side and usual self for the few chapters out. Very interested to see where the story leads!
Its a good novel with detailed descriptions, good character development and personality! The story reminds me a lot about mythological tales and has a sense of mystery about the entire thing so far... Definitely something I'll keep on the burner with regards to reading.
"Beautiful" That's all I can say. World building? Top notch. Character personalities? Superb! Mind boggling? I have no idea why I haven't seen this novel before. So came my conclusion. An awesome novel 😎
Ts a good story with, well dorm pacing, there are small grammatical errors but otherwise it's enjoyable. if u see this review then I encourage you to have a go and read it for yourself other than looking at just my opinion, all in all though I enjoyed this. kudos to the author
This story was a nice read . The Author has their own style of writing which presents things with a clear picture and seems to blend an explanation with unique ways to show the characters and their development. The Quality of writing is top notch and it provides unique characters within it's setting.
I think this is a really interesting and fun take on the Isekai genre. My only slight negative is having the literal, fresh out of the womb, newborn child use his powers and have excessive intelligence in front of his parents. Not a single person questioning it and just praising him for being unique? I felt it was a bit too fast? It isn't quite my own personal power fantasy, but props to the author for going forward so strongly with their own vision. I recommend for enjoyers of the Isekai/reincarnation into fantasy world trope.
The author excels in crafting vivid and immersive world-building, drawing readers into a realm where magic and mystery abound. The pacing is brisk, with each chapter unveiling new revelations and challenges for Nyx to overcome. The character development is also well-executed, as Nyx grapples with his past while forging a new path forward. While the premise may seem familiar, "The Rise Of The First Night Elf" offers fresh twists and turns that keep readers eagerly turning the pages. Fans of fantasy and epic tales of redemption will find much to enjoy in this compelling debut novel. With its engaging plot, well-rounded characters, and richly imagined setting, this book marks the Author as a talent to watch in the world of fantasy literature.
The first chapter, titled Chapter 1, threw me off a bit and the writing style was a little confusing in that I thought it was a purely romance novel. However the rest of the story is interesting. I'll give you that. The world background, character development and writing style are spun together and create a captivating story. The update stability is my favorite take on it, so It gives me a lot to read in the span of a weak, beating most Webnovels. Keep up the good work author, looking forward to more.
Really enjoyable work. Starts of with showing giving the reader insight into the protagonist's train of thought. Establishes the strength of his character and how that relates to in introduction to the power system. I'm a big fan of Polytheism in fiction as well as several sub-power systems that establish contrast between characters of different standings and backgrounds.
OK this book is too underrated it's so good and it has so much potential that it's mind buggling so give it a try
I have only read up to chapter three and I can tell that the story has great potential. I love the story idea and how it flowed from him being in the coffee shop with his stepbrother and stepsister in-law to his death. I'm not entirely sure where I stand with the pacing and that may be due to descriptions I suppose.In terms of description, it was quite alright but I feel like a little more needs to be done to allow readers to immerse themselves deeper into the world and character emotions you're creating with your story. From Austin's story in the prologue, it is easy to sympathize with him but just on a surface level. A little more description and readers will have a deeper emotional connection with him just from the early stages. Most of his story was told in several short sentences that did not allow a build up of feelings/emotions attached to it. This will also make the pacing seem less rushed. In chapter two; instead of splitting his physical actions into short sentences, all of that could be combined into a paragraph where his actions have a flow. Overall, you did a great job and I look forward to reading more.
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I like there sotry so far and I like where it’s going. The writing style is not so cheap like other story’s on here so it’s a nice change of pace. Hope to read more.
I hated it, the only good thing was what the character looks like, [img=Your move]