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Diva gasped. She seemed to realize what she had done so she frantically looked around while saying, "Oh my god! Do you have alcohol or hand sanitizer!? What if I got infected by this philanderer's disability and rotten head? I need a sanitizer! Kayden! Do you have any?!"
LGBT+ · superAyan
Great story. I like the idea the way it was put down with the time ability which made things interesting from the start. There are a few spelling mistakes throughout the chapters which can be noticed for a few words but it is not very frequent. While they don't take away from the story it is something that could be fixed by the Author with a quick review over their chapter. I was able to follow the plot well despite the many focuses on the system stuff and enjoyed it.
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Suspense
The man sits back and watches his Min-ho as he tries to stop himself from being dragged out of the room. "Oh, my Min-ho. If only you would accept me." he says softly to no one in particular. The door seals closed a second time, dampening the boy's screams down the hall.
Realistic · Ramens_theBestXD
Thank you for your support.
Dior sends a vicious punch to Zara's gut and bends her over. A kick to her ass follows that strike, causing Zara to face plant onto the fire.
Fantasy · Vanilla_Chino
The Execution!
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Fantasy · Vanilla_Chino
Just as -his-
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Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
You may need to double check this sentence..
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Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
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Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
I don't think that why should be there.
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Fantasy · Ninestar619_5803
I have to say I didn't expect this to be as good as it was. I liked the characters and the action scenes they were pretty nice. The concept of what was written was pretty unique and 'hot' (lol). But I liked the relationship that built up with the characters the most. It sorta reminds me of something I can't put my finger on but either way, pretty solid and hooking. Before I knew it I was reading more and more. The only problem I had was really the transitions. sometimes they happen a bit 'too' fast. That sometimes threw me off. I know it is mentioned where they are going but it would be nice to see their arrival sometimes. That's the only thing from me, everything else hit's right. Good writing.
Broken Bond: Between Vices and Virtues (BL)
LGBT+ · superAyan