/ Fantasy / Magic Chronicles : Fallen Race
4.44 (17 ratings)
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-Warning: This story contains graphic scenes of violence and bloodshed. No one under 18 is allowed-
Have you ever pondered the mechanisms behind the Demon King's power system? Wondered how they attain such formidable strength at the game's outset, or why they seem to advance in levels more swiftly and efficiently than the heroes? Look no further, for this narrative delves into those very mysteries.
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"Magic Chronicles" is a game that retells the story of a war between humans and demons.
To his annoyance, Reji is given credit for the last accomplishment after finishing successfully.
The reason for his annoyance was because of the title of the achievement...[Unforgivable]
Was it because he stole a passerby's vehicle and quickly got there?
Or that he broke into other people's houses so as to break unlocked treasure boxes?
Or that he infiltrated the cult in order to "borrow" their precious relic?
"Without my careful endeavors as the savior, how would your world stand upon the invasion of the demonic race from the rift? What will you employ to cast out and seal the desolate chasms of disorder the demons summoned and are now threatening your realm?"
[Beep...The summoning ritual of the Demon King has been detected. Soon thou as well shall be chosen and descend into that chaotic rift]
Reji: ".?"
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-The evil tag is there for a reason; please don't decide if he is evil or not from the first arc-
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every 500+ power stones = 1+ chapter
every 50+ golden ticket = 1+ chapter
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Let's keep this as simple as possible, I saw this in the novel ranks and decided to give it a try, but I couldn't get past chapter 3. What put me down wasn't story related, rather it was the quality of the writing itself. First, large spaces here and there. You could try using the preview feature in your chapter publishing before publishing to improve that. Second, the grammar and spelling are simply bad resulting in a lot of question marks whenever I'm trying to read. Ex1: [A thousand years ago, they were defeated in the Demon-Human War and sealed here by the "Child of Destiny". They have not given up. Up until now, all along within these years, they still clung to life using the meagre resource, slowly recovering his racial truly let them finally breathing out a deep breath.] All good until "slowly recovering", then what? You should have ended the sentence at 'slowly recovering' with a dot but what did the sentence after that mean? "his racial truly let them finally breathing out a deep breath." Ex2: [They were starving, coldness with endless darkness rampant and they replicated themselves waiting for a thousand years.] No Comment. Ex3: ["Great demon king, I am the succubus demon Eileen, the enchantment of the demon race, our clan is willing to offer our essence for accomplish our king's fate"] She's an...enchantment? for accomplish? ------------ Other than that, the opening of chapter 3 is off as well. It just feels like a first-person POV then a third-person POV then a first-person POV again.
Can you remove the "villain" tag from your novel ? Otherwise, you will be heavily insulted by those who come to read the novel because of this tag, like me. I'm just warning you. Don't add meaningless tags to the novel for more readers. And yes, for those who will read this, do not read this novel just for this tag! MC is an anti-hero style hero who, although he is a demon lord belonging to the evil faction, expresses his discomfort with their 'evil' actions at every opportunity, and although he is not a saint, he has his own sense of morality. This is not a novel where you will witness a real demon lord and his relentless evil. Don't waste your time.
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I have reached the chapters 60 and my impression is that the interaction between mc and fl is not so good It looks forced if you use logic but the overall novel is good for time pass there are some minor mistakes but ok
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Reveal SpoilerBem nรฃo tem muito oque dizer. Vamos comeรงar com o MC completa perda de tempo, se oque acontece com ele fosse uma situaรงรฃo real ele estaria morto assim que foi convocado.(bom que nรฃo seja). A dificuldade para ele aumentar o poder รฉ muito grande(nรฃo fui muito a frente do romance) pelo menos para mim, devido as escolhas idiot@s dele. E acima de tudo para um Rei Demรดnio ele รฉ patรฉtico e fraco. Se o autor(a) queria que ele fosse fraco do jeito que ele รฉ, era melhor te-lo convocar como um demรดnio normal, e assim ele iria subindo no poder, pois acho que para conseguir o titulo de Rei Demรดnio precisa de muito mais do que pecado. Fora o absurdo da Santa que depois de todo esse tempo deveria ser extremamente mais forte que ele e sua raรงa.( nรฃo cheguei nessa parte, apenas suposiรงรฃo).
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