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Becoming the new Protagonist of the Game’s World
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Can there be two protagonists in the world?
It was an impossible feat to achieve while playing the game.
But now that Loic Ferblanche has reincarnated into the same game world, he will try to archive the impossible once again.
Follow the path of the genius boy to see how he changes everything to create a world where two protagonists can exist at the same time.
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This story is very inresting! It kinda reminds me of sword art online in a way based on how you was starting the stats of the book! I would say in the first chapter the paragraph was really long it’s best to break it down so it flows better ! Overall the book is really good! Keep up the good work :)
The story shines in character development and progression, with a clear, concise writing style that's free of grammatical errors. Although the system concept needs refinement, it grew on me, offering a unique twist to the protagonist's journey. The novel marries a unique system element with compelling character arcs and plot advancement. It showcases the author's ability to adapt and improve, promising an engaging read for fans of the genre. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story and its characters evolve.
The plot and concept of having two protagonists in the same game world is intriguing and sets up for an interesting story. The writing style is easy to follow and engaging. However, some more description and development of the characters and world would enhance the reader's connection to the story. Overall, great start to your first novel and I am curious to see where the story goes. Keep writing and seeking feedback to continue improving!
The story progression is good, but the system could be improved. There were no grammar mistakes, and the story as a whole was very interesting.
hey there! I like it! For me ur writing is good, I'm interested what will happen to mc! Keep up good work. I didn't see any grammar mistakes and ur plot is fun.
i love reading these types of books. Love the system, it never gets old and I eat it up every single time. Love all the elements included and i like your writing style as well.
I don't really read system novels , but I like where this one is going .I also like the way is written , is kind of unique comparing to other ones.Good job author !I am curious how it will develop further .
This is story is pretty interesting. Writing is not bad and the way the status screen was displayed was also good. But, I don't know where the story is heading. Is it to only become the protagonist of the world? In the starting where he described the the game felt unique. Nevertheless, this story is good. Keep up the good work author.
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A classic beginning of the genre, a transmigrate, but with a novel premise, at least in the purpose of the game itself, killing the current protagonist to become one. The writing style is fluid, maybe a little more descriptors to get more into that world and its details wouldn't be bad, but I'm only starting the first chapters so I'll love to see what direction the novel takes
The writing and development is good so far. System/stats thingy seems to be meh, but its doable. Chapters are very short and paragraphs are very long in the first chapters. However this is no longer a problem in the later chaps. So good job author!!!