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Fantasy · KuyaImbo
nice, keep it going
ch 0 4 Chapter 4: Gathering
Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
selena
After ten minutes, the group left and navigated through the floors inside the land wagon. Aaron led the group and climbed to the upper floors of the Cargo Hall where Selene believed the illegal cargo was.
Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
page breaked the paragraph
"Sounds fair enough!" The assistant warden replied, "Allow me a moment
Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
remove "you" in the sentence
"I hope you I am not making a decision I won't regret!" Alexi warned Adela and Henry.
Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
ok... things are getting interesting
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Return of A Prince
Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
not bad
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Unexpected Guest
Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
keep up the good work, author!!!
i noticed the significant improvement of your writing skills in this chapter... the structure became cleaner
ch 0 7 The Past Is Now Your Own part 1/2
Fantasy · Kari_Chan
insteresting... okay
ch 0 1 There is More to Him
Fantasy · Kari_Chan
Yep. Hehe
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Fantasy · KuyaImbo
The story writing is good and easy to follow. I know it's still in the early chapters but the premise is decent and interestinig. For now, I'll leave a 5 star. I'll give another review when the author uploads more chapters.
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APOKALYPSIS: Lost Magic Awakening
Fantasy · KuyaImbo