GOD WILLS IT (ASOIAF)

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Sagvey_Ay

my sword is his justice, and the blood on my sword is the manifestation of my justice ( AMEN )!#$@::@&-€@&#:&@€@*@;!,,@#(#$(@¥¥you are missing people's sleep in the evening ( if you continue to write the spelling and idea perfectly, I expect more )

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Lycarus

I only read two chapters, so maybe I shouldn't comment on this fanfic... but I couldn't continue reading, everything is very raw and unfiltered. who is the MC? what does he want? what's he like? How did he end up in this world? What is the vision of this fanfic? basically there is no introduction, there is only information and conversations that there is no type of preparation for the reader, it is possible that readers must guess the objective of each part written by the author, as it does not make anything apparent. It's a good proposal, and I was eager to try it since it's been a while since I read fanfic, but this needs to be worked on better, the first chapters are not at all inviting for readers.

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greatcheesemaster

Amazing interesting story a dream come true of mine I really liked Baldwin he was like a real life main character and I would a 💯 recommend this story for everyone

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ssyffix

Pacing and Dialogue shines here. The MC is easily my fave part

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Diffuser

I beg for more………………………………………………………………..

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Gs9Gosohard

I wish to have this story improve as we go along the way but nonetheless don't worry my weary readers everything will be apparent. Please bear with me

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Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee