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A man dies in a strange way and meets a goddess who tells him because of the thing his last life accomplished, he would get some boons and go to another world.
Watch as the man who became the demi god of wind and waves Maui lives in the world of pirates. The drums of liberation are not exclusive to Nika.
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The story has great potential but the events feel more forced and confusing, like how the MC can survive the fall from sky with only slight discomfort and no broken bones but gets bitten by Arlong, even if he controls his attack power while fighting his body defence getting weak makes no sense. Another event is when he talked with the dying gang leader in his falcon form and decided to turn human and walk out of the front door instead of flying in his falcon form. Well the story is just getting started and some of the author's view on the one piece world is intriguing so if this gets better I'll write a better review with a better rating.
Reveal SpoilerThis is great I love this You're doing phenomenal so far. And if you're ever stuck remember the vastness of the world you're writing and make a silly little adventure or two. Please don't drop
Author Sir_Stronghold
This has great potential. just make sure to watch the pacing, try not to skip around so much. So far I think we have had one small time skip, which was clearly indicated in the story. If you wanna do a bigger one next time make sure to clearly indicated how long the time skip is