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A man in transmigrated into the Senator Thalron Veridian. While simultaneously being the King of Thyferra.
Watch as he fights for his homeplanet and form factions in the Senate, while at the same time preparing for the Clone Wars.
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As of chapter 8, I take back my positive review, it doesn't matter if it's readable if what I'm reading is trash. The author keeps twisting lore and writing every character and organisation as egoless mannequins that only exist to give the MC what he wants, it's just plot convenience after plot convenience, and doesn't read like a lively story, it's just a list of them MC going around shopping.
The writing quality makes this physically painful to read, I think the author would have more success if he posted this in his native language.
I tried this story again because It has a unique premise and I believe that if it was written by a competent author then this could have been one of the best star wars fics ever but it is not. The story is not engaging at all because it has no stakes and the MC faces no challenges, this is exemplified in the Kuat Drive Yard chapter where the MC recruits the best starship designer they have with no effort, no discussion, no trade, no nothing, it just happens because the author wants it to. Next he says he can just buy a whole starship manufacturing corporation for 200 million (this is pennies compared to what he's been throwing around) the author just hands his SI everything on a platter because he's to useless to make these things happen organically. Don't get me started on Blissex and his daughter calling the MC's designs genius, they're not even designs, just drawings of the hulls of cannon starships (since if he can actually design starships then he doesn't need Blissex). In short, the author is too unintelligent to write a smart MC so he compensates by making every other character a slackjawed, drooling moron and artificially removing every obstacle in his path. Do not waste your time on this.
Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.
Enjoy the character, feels like a fresh take. Thanks for an interesting story and hope you can keep up the great work!
Story in early phase but it has good story line . Author did good amount of research about story but quality is not there yet It will take him to refine the story . But it is good for 1st time writer . Those wha are interested in military and poltitical ploy with action and little bit business building can give it a try .
it's an excellent story and proving to be one of the best I've read in a while
love the story not many star wars novels go with a leader character and plus not starting out the character with more midiclorianos then anakin skywalker love the story keep up the great work
Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work. Keep up the good work.
Great story really interesting idea. The most fun I’ve had with a Star Wars fan fic in awhile. Keep up the good work.
A new and as far as I can tell unique story by a good writer. While there are areas that can be improved, overall it is a good story with a mostly stable rate of updates, especially considering the author is basically a rookie who is writing this in his spare time. I am personally looking forward to seeing how they improve and develop as the story progresses.
I personally think this is a good story idea; it's not another Anakin pov fanfic, which is already a thumbs up from me, and although the grammar isn’t 10 out of 10, it's still better than some of the other fanfics I’ve read.
It’s great. Differs from all the other star wars self inserts by not being the usual jedi. Story is paced good and other aspects like the economy are well thought out
The story is off to a good start and being a senator is new, since most fanfic of Star Wars have force sensitive or soldier in most. Keep up the good story.