Highschool dxd : Yasaka is my wife

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Roktah

seems boring and bland i also don't quite understand the use of his sacred gear. angel/devil he can turn into an angel or devil for a limited time(5min). in a world of only humans and maybe yokai, that might be an interesting concept but in dxd it just seems so utterly useless, i just don't see the point, there are ways to become a devil or an angel already, so why?

LV 15

Requien

Its Boring did read all chaps and there is nothing exciting about this FF.

LV 1

Daniel_Albor

Otro FanFiction de un gordo perdedor virgen que vive en casa de sus papás 😔 Tenía fe al principio, pero después se vuelve una porquería genérica como todos los inútiles escritores de este sitio.

LV 4

Xandra_N

This story is really good and the character s are interesting. The story is still is in it’s early stages and is being mass released so can’t say anything about the update stability. The characters and world building are quite good since so far they are constant with the source material. Only criticism I can give is please change the name of the fanfic. Although the name is thought provoking it gives off Chinese MTL fanfic vibes, this will push away a lot of readers who will not even give a chance to the fanfic and will automatically assume that it is trash. Except that so far the story has been well written and I hope it continues on like this.

LV 5

jAz17

so how's he the husband og yasaka? ,........................................................?????????????????????

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DaoistEcAsfF

Another story with an idiotic MC driven by emotions in a stupid way that is just ridiculous and causes even more problems, apart from the lack of objectives, it's not so bad in the beginning but the fact that he is led by the other characters is unbearable, sometimes even not wanting anymore not having enough decision to just do what he wants, sad and disgusting character.

LV 4

ZombieSirGatoREAD

The story is good, but the title is kinda misleading lol. You might wanna change it to something like “double gear” or “Florida man moves to Japan!” (JK on the second one lol) and I don’t know if you added a dead or alive tag but you might wanna just to show that this is a au dxd.

LV 13

Left_Nut_Of_Madara

OK so lets start on this one. 1. The title doesn't Match the opening scene in the slightest and that's kind of necessary in some regard and the complete lack of a synopsis isn't helping. 2. All we got is the usual go school in high school DxD. This is overused by this point and is killing DxD fic's 3. The writting quality is good at least very readable. Overall The author desperately needs some original ideas but has the writing part down.

LV 4

The_Dark_Hydrax

Hahaha when I read the title all I could think of was this

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NeaCambelt

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Brightknight163

I normally don't write these but I kinda want 2 for this one. Just ignore the idiots who don't like it and keep going. This might not be for everyone, but you shouldn't be trying to ever make everyone happy. It's a good work that I enjoy reading so please keep it up

LV 13

Kobus_Liebenberg_4211

The story is fast paced and isn’t very well built Mc isn’t very smart and so is are the other characters Mc is very emotional In my opinion it it’s a good story but it’s ok I mean it’s skipping a lot and the stuff they add in isn’t very clever so it’s a no brainier story mostly ment for not thinking about the small things

LV 15

Godmakerxx

It’s just a moody loser that doesn’t do anything with out being pushed into it great concept bad mc for it

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WALEED

It's a great story. Do you have a link to the previous story? Or his name or where it was published, I have an interest in seeing the difference between the two stories

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NeaCambelt

L'auteur ajoute trop de truc . Des flash-back inutiles Des trait de caractère inutiles du mc Des ajouts hors canon Et pour finir il essaye de dramatiser le MC du moins sa façon d'agir : pk il veut pas de harem. Mais c débile puisque il a coucher àvec kasumi et yasaka donc soit c un enfoirés soit il a pas de couilles [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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NeaCambelt

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