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Hi everyone, After reading your comments, I decided to make another review. There seems to be a misunderstanding about the novel. Some readers feel wronged after expecting a story that's "against" cliches. Here's the thing, my story isn't actually against cliches, its about avoiding cliches, but you cant really avoid cliches if they don't happen now can you. There will be cliche scenes, its about how Xiang Yu handles them. Just felt I should clarify this.
After Reading this i am starting to realize how OP even the Most Basic of Cheats can become If their given time to develop and to be honest this Story is a breathe of fresh Air with the use of memes and modern english Language instead of the usual refined speeches and english Used by Cultivators
A great book. Loved the characters. Though some parts I didn't like, but i get that the story can't cater to every liking of every reader, so overall it's a great job done by the Author, Keep up the good work and write more such amazing stories.
Well, It was very good at the start, I thought it would be a slow paced novel considering the MCs ability. But the author is quite literally forcing unholy amount of plot progression, like from the start of novel to now it has been only 2-3 months. There was only one timeskip of like 10 days and that's all. There is no proper growth of MC, the Novel ends in chapter 470 or something and by chapter 250 he is still foundation building. I really really hate novels which rush there ending and there middle part of the plot.
This novel really has potential. But I'm done, I can't read it anymore. It's just frustrating. - Almost non existent world building - Annoying character interaction - Author keeps using modern words in this novel. Bro, it's cultivation world, not urban SMH - No time skips which makes the novel boring since it's just repetitive. As of 162, MC is still Qi gathering (Ik MC just started cultivating for 2months) But the author just keep introducing new BS instead of cultivating all day. The novel has 478 CH, and at ch 162 MC is still at Qi gathering. Idk if there will be time skips but I'm done. This novel is pure torture.
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It was a enjoyable read, I've read a similar novel and compared to that this one is on another league of its own.
๐๐ข ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ๐! ๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐ข๐ง๐ข๐ฌ๐ก๐๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐ก๐๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐๐ฒ, ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ณ๐ ๐๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฒ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ง ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐ก๐๐๐ ๐ฐ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ . ๐๐จ๐ฎโ๐ฏ๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐๐๐๐ฅ๐ฌ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฏ๐ข๐, ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ฏ๐ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ฑ๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐ฏ๐. ๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐ ๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ซ๐๐ ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐๐ซ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ซ๐๐ซ๐๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐๐ก ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ข๐๐ฌ. ๐โ๐ฆ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ ๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ฌ ๐๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง๐ฌ, ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ ๐, ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐๐จ๐ซ ๐๐ฎ๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ซ๐ฌ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฐ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ซ๐ค, ๐ ๐ข๐ฆ๐ฆ๐๐๐ข๐๐ญ๐๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ก๐ญ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐ฉ๐จ๐ฐ๐๐ซ๐๐ฎ๐ฅ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐ค ๐ข๐ง ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ฆ. ๐๐ก๐ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ , ๐ญ๐จ๐ง๐, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐๐ง๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐๐ซ๐ ๐๐ฅ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ฒ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ๐. ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ'๐ซ๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐จ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ข๐๐๐ ๐จ๐ ๐๐จ๐ง๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐จ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง, ๐โ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ญ๐๐ฅ๐ค ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐ฐ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฆ๐๐ค๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐ก๐๐ฉ๐ฉ๐๐ง. ๐ ๐๐๐ฅ ๐๐ซ๐๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ก ๐ฆ๐ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ (AVA_CRAFTS).
Cliche, kinda boring unfortunately. I hate to be so vague on a review for a book. Would say this one just isnโt for me. Read the fist 50 chapters to get a feel for it.
I finished this novel (different site cause I'm poor), and I loved it. While the ending seemed a little rushed, I understand as the progression was very easy to become exponential, I just wish that we got more of the journey from immortal and beyond.
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wonderful adventure .................................................................................................... ...........................................................................................................................................................................
Was here since the beginning it gave me joy everyday to wake up and see 2 chapters being released now I am sad and happy to finally see the end
Novel is very nice to read. The early arcs and general story are great and the ideas are innovative until the Author decides to rush the story to get to the end. It's one of those novels that you can read to pass the time but I'm unsure about repeatability. Read the first 10-20 or even 30 chapters and see how you feel
One sentence to describe "There should limit to cowardness"๐ค ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Cautious but lk stupid mc, way too cringe relationships with other characters, World development is lacking, the story progression is unbearably slow which is okay, but the mc with a doubling system is not really using it properly, Author kinda tried to base mc on han jue but failed miserably by probably getting in his own head mixing up his ideas.
this was one of the best on this site . really really liked it ๐๐๐๐
The story so far is pretty well written, just here and there got me the slang phrases etc. which kinda allienates the feeling of... well cultivation world, especially when It is not ML (male lead) saying that
This story is absolutely fantastic. I would recommend it to anyone and likes the game and mindset storyline with Side of cultivation.
it was a pretty interesting read. it started out pretty well paced with good story telling. in the later chapters it went warp speed skipping over quite a bit. I feel like it could've been a much longer story with more depth. missed opportunity for sure. was well worth the read however.
What can i say.. well, i reached the end so.. mean it's good :) Author read every single comments, answered pretty much every question i could have had (and i can be quite annoying with that), and took account of some suggestions here and here from readers. The writing style took me off gard, it's refreshing. As for the rest discover it for yourself :)
seriously mc is like supporting characters while female lead like true main character mc is powerful but really it's frustrating to read I read about 300+ch but it's boring no blood pumping and mc is downright timid person . He is just like a supporting character to me
This novel synopsis really similar to My attributes are increasing infinitely novel. But I think plot is different. It's just concepts are similar.
This is NGU Idle in written form. The story starts slow and is repetetive, but it gives me a dopamin rush when I autistically check all the numbers go up. I like that the author is definately totally aware of the absurdity (love the short one-liners at the end of chapters). The actual story starts very late, so be ready for a pure NGU until chapter 100. I could say so much more, but I rather read another chapterโฆand so should you. :)
Everything is of good quality except the female lead, she is so 1 dimensional and boring
I am quite disappointed with this novel. Don't be deceived with how great the reviews are, they are born out of the desperate need for any barely readable novel on this website, though I could say this one is included in that category. I started with high hopes, you know, an original cultivation story with a seemingly overpowered cheat and a seemingly smart mc, what could go wrong? Everything. Everything went wrong. The author took the worst qualities of both the translated(chinese) novels and the original novels on this site and combined them. Of course people will ridicule mc the moment he steps out of his house, because why not? its not like they have anything better to do, like cultivating. And of course a powerful cultivator guarding the book pavilion will behave exactly the same as those faceless nameless side characters, ridiculing the mc just for the sake of it. And of course he will get offended when mc's master defended him. And of course he will attack mc, die, and out of nowhere it turns out he was part of a greater conspiracy with bigger bosses behind him. The same disgustingly clichรฉ trope with a bigger baddie behind every bad guy who offends mc just for the sake of it. I'm not even touching the fml love interest with a ten foot pole, that's just a whole another equally disgusting pile of dung not worth digging into. These all represent the worst parts of the translated novels on this site for me. Now as for the worst part of the originals; his cheat is unreasonably nerfed(definitely not what was portrayed in the title and synopsis but at least the nerf was done right at the start so you know what you're getting into and it wasn't exactly unreasonable), the interactions with other characters are unsatisfactory and repetitive, mc's character is also unlikable for the most part like he literally possessed the guy's body and now he's in love with his junior sister in what like ten days? whatever. TLDR; Don't expect anything great, or fun. What I have felt reading this novel, at least the parts of it that I've read, is frustation.
Hey everyone, author review time (Feel free to ask any questions in this thread and I'll answer them) 1. The usual, NO its not harem, just one girl 2. No ntr (idk why i have to clarify this) no smut as well 3. Romance is there but don't bet on it, its mostly about powering up and watching numbers go up Update rate is 2 chapter a day Thanks for taking the time to read this masterpiece -mKonic
Hi everyone, After reading your comments, I decided to make another review. There seems to be a misunderstanding about the novel. Some readers feel wronged after expecting a story that's "against" cliches. Here's the thing, my story isn't actually against cliches, its about avoiding cliches, but you cant really avoid cliches if they don't happen now can you. There will be cliche scenes, its about how Xiang Yu handles them. Just felt I should clarify this.
After Reading this i am starting to realize how OP even the Most Basic of Cheats can become If their given time to develop and to be honest this Story is a breathe of fresh Air with the use of memes and modern english Language instead of the usual refined speeches and english Used by Cultivators
A great book. Loved the characters. Though some parts I didn't like, but i get that the story can't cater to every liking of every reader, so overall it's a great job done by the Author, Keep up the good work and write more such amazing stories.
Well, It was very good at the start, I thought it would be a slow paced novel considering the MCs ability. But the author is quite literally forcing unholy amount of plot progression, like from the start of novel to now it has been only 2-3 months. There was only one timeskip of like 10 days and that's all. There is no proper growth of MC, the Novel ends in chapter 470 or something and by chapter 250 he is still foundation building. I really really hate novels which rush there ending and there middle part of the plot.
This novel really has potential. But I'm done, I can't read it anymore. It's just frustrating. - Almost non existent world building - Annoying character interaction - Author keeps using modern words in this novel. Bro, it's cultivation world, not urban SMH - No time skips which makes the novel boring since it's just repetitive. As of 162, MC is still Qi gathering (Ik MC just started cultivating for 2months) But the author just keep introducing new BS instead of cultivating all day. The novel has 478 CH, and at ch 162 MC is still at Qi gathering. Idk if there will be time skips but I'm done. This novel is pure torture.
Reveal Spoiler It was a enjoyable read, I've read a similar novel and compared to that this one is on another league of its own.
๐๐ข ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ๐! ๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐ข๐ง๐ข๐ฌ๐ก๐๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐ก๐๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐๐ฒ, ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ณ๐ ๐๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฒ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ง ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐ก๐๐๐ ๐ฐ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ . ๐๐จ๐ฎโ๐ฏ๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ ๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐๐๐๐ฅ๐ฌ ๐ซ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฏ๐ข๐, ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ฏ๐ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ฑ๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐ฏ๐. ๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐ ๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ซ๐๐ ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐๐ซ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ซ๐๐ซ๐๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฌ๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐๐ก ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ข๐๐ฌ. ๐โ๐ฆ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ฐ๐ก๐จ ๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ฌ ๐๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง๐ฌ, ๐ฆ๐๐ง๐ ๐, ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐๐จ๐ซ ๐๐ฎ๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ซ๐ฌ, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฐ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ซ๐ค, ๐ ๐ข๐ฆ๐ฆ๐๐๐ข๐๐ญ๐๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ก๐ญ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐ฉ๐จ๐ฐ๐๐ซ๐๐ฎ๐ฅ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐ค ๐ข๐ง ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ฆ. ๐๐ก๐ ๐ฉ๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ , ๐ญ๐จ๐ง๐, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐๐ง๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง ๐๐ซ๐ ๐๐ฅ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ฒ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ๐. ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ'๐ซ๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐จ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ข๐๐๐ ๐จ๐ ๐๐จ๐ง๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ข๐ง๐ญ๐จ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง, ๐โ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ญ๐๐ฅ๐ค ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐ฐ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฆ๐๐ค๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐ก๐๐ฉ๐ฉ๐๐ง. ๐ ๐๐๐ฅ ๐๐ซ๐๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ก ๐ฆ๐ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ (AVA_CRAFTS).
Cliche, kinda boring unfortunately. I hate to be so vague on a review for a book. Would say this one just isnโt for me. Read the fist 50 chapters to get a feel for it.
I finished this novel (different site cause I'm poor), and I loved it. While the ending seemed a little rushed, I understand as the progression was very easy to become exponential, I just wish that we got more of the journey from immortal and beyond.
Reveal Spoiler wonderful adventure .................................................................................................... ...........................................................................................................................................................................
Was here since the beginning it gave me joy everyday to wake up and see 2 chapters being released now I am sad and happy to finally see the end
Novel is very nice to read. The early arcs and general story are great and the ideas are innovative until the Author decides to rush the story to get to the end. It's one of those novels that you can read to pass the time but I'm unsure about repeatability. Read the first 10-20 or even 30 chapters and see how you feel
One sentence to describe "There should limit to cowardness"๐ค ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Cautious but lk stupid mc, way too cringe relationships with other characters, World development is lacking, the story progression is unbearably slow which is okay, but the mc with a doubling system is not really using it properly, Author kinda tried to base mc on han jue but failed miserably by probably getting in his own head mixing up his ideas.
this was one of the best on this site . really really liked it ๐๐๐๐
The story so far is pretty well written, just here and there got me the slang phrases etc. which kinda allienates the feeling of... well cultivation world, especially when It is not ML (male lead) saying that
This story is absolutely fantastic. I would recommend it to anyone and likes the game and mindset storyline with Side of cultivation.
it was a pretty interesting read. it started out pretty well paced with good story telling. in the later chapters it went warp speed skipping over quite a bit. I feel like it could've been a much longer story with more depth. missed opportunity for sure. was well worth the read however.
What can i say.. well, i reached the end so.. mean it's good :) Author read every single comments, answered pretty much every question i could have had (and i can be quite annoying with that), and took account of some suggestions here and here from readers. The writing style took me off gard, it's refreshing. As for the rest discover it for yourself :)
seriously mc is like supporting characters while female lead like true main character mc is powerful but really it's frustrating to read I read about 300+ch but it's boring no blood pumping and mc is downright timid person . He is just like a supporting character to me
This novel synopsis really similar to My attributes are increasing infinitely novel. But I think plot is different. It's just concepts are similar.
This is NGU Idle in written form. The story starts slow and is repetetive, but it gives me a dopamin rush when I autistically check all the numbers go up. I like that the author is definately totally aware of the absurdity (love the short one-liners at the end of chapters). The actual story starts very late, so be ready for a pure NGU until chapter 100. I could say so much more, but I rather read another chapterโฆand so should you. :)
Everything is of good quality except the female lead, she is so 1 dimensional and boring
I am quite disappointed with this novel. Don't be deceived with how great the reviews are, they are born out of the desperate need for any barely readable novel on this website, though I could say this one is included in that category. I started with high hopes, you know, an original cultivation story with a seemingly overpowered cheat and a seemingly smart mc, what could go wrong? Everything. Everything went wrong. The author took the worst qualities of both the translated(chinese) novels and the original novels on this site and combined them. Of course people will ridicule mc the moment he steps out of his house, because why not? its not like they have anything better to do, like cultivating. And of course a powerful cultivator guarding the book pavilion will behave exactly the same as those faceless nameless side characters, ridiculing the mc just for the sake of it. And of course he will get offended when mc's master defended him. And of course he will attack mc, die, and out of nowhere it turns out he was part of a greater conspiracy with bigger bosses behind him. The same disgustingly clichรฉ trope with a bigger baddie behind every bad guy who offends mc just for the sake of it. I'm not even touching the fml love interest with a ten foot pole, that's just a whole another equally disgusting pile of dung not worth digging into. These all represent the worst parts of the translated novels on this site for me. Now as for the worst part of the originals; his cheat is unreasonably nerfed(definitely not what was portrayed in the title and synopsis but at least the nerf was done right at the start so you know what you're getting into and it wasn't exactly unreasonable), the interactions with other characters are unsatisfactory and repetitive, mc's character is also unlikable for the most part like he literally possessed the guy's body and now he's in love with his junior sister in what like ten days? whatever. TLDR; Don't expect anything great, or fun. What I have felt reading this novel, at least the parts of it that I've read, is frustation.
Hey everyone, author review time (Feel free to ask any questions in this thread and I'll answer them) 1. The usual, NO its not harem, just one girl 2. No ntr (idk why i have to clarify this) no smut as well 3. Romance is there but don't bet on it, its mostly about powering up and watching numbers go up Update rate is 2 chapter a day Thanks for taking the time to read this masterpiece -mKonic