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Crossing Worlds with the Child of Elder Blood

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Author: Thinking_out_Loud

4.34 (13 ratings)

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Finn Wegner, a lone world traveler, accidentally stumbles upon Cirilla, a child of the elder blood, during one of his passage through a dead world. Now, both of their destinies changed, for the better or for worse...

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This is a multiverse story, though I'm not planning for each world to be a long self contained story. It'll be more of short arcs, 5-10 chapters each, and a lot of it will be slice-of-life, with, at least for the first half of the story, lead to a plotline in the Witcher game.

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world so far:

-Westeros/ASOIAF/GOT/HOTD/AKOTSK
-Pokemon
-DC Dark Knight of Steel
-Cyberpunk

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LV 5

SaintSin

Finished reading up to Chapter 33. The story presents a very interesting premise, but the execution falls short in several key areas. The weakest element is unfortunately the main character. He lacks charisma, and more importantly, his motivations remain unclear. After five or more transitions through inhabited worlds—including some not shown prior to the start of the story—it makes sense that he would develop a more detached, observer-like mindset. However, this is where the issue begins. A true observer would linger, study, and meaningfully engage with each world. Instead, the MC arrives, appears to take in the setting superficially, mentally “checks it off,” and then leaves for reasons that are never clearly established. This lack of defined purpose undermines narrative cohesion. Ciri’s introduction adds a needed element of unpredictability and energy, but the development of their relationship feels underdeveloped. Their dynamic has potential, yet it lacks sufficient depth and progression to feel impactful. Another major issue is the MC’s insistence on preserving canon. He repeatedly warns Ciri to be cautious without explaining what she should actually be cautious about. If he has knowledge of future events, there is little justification for withholding critical information—especially when doing so would not meaningfully increase his risk. This creates frustration and makes his decision-making appear artificial rather than strategic. There is also a noticeable inconsistency in his behavior. At times, he is overly cautious, deliberately avoiding attention to remain uninvolved. Yet in other instances—particularly in significantly more dangerous settings—he inserts himself directly into central conflicts with little justification beyond “that’s what they do.” This contradiction weakens the character’s internal logic and breaks immersion. Overall, the concept has strong potential, but the current execution limits its impact. A more focused rewrite—particularly around the MC’s motivations, consistency, and interpersonal development—would significantly strengthen the story.

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Demiurge_Ohara

Strong start, but gradually degrades when it comes to character and world development, mc, despite having travelled multiple worlds showed no signs of taking advantages, sure he might no have those that got soft locks like genetics but what stops him from modern items and apparels, guns, kevlar, chargers, etc. why waste time on meaninglesss interaction like fighting a knight when u are a civilian prior 4 years ahgo, and again.. where are your arsenal from other worlds??? his personality is bland as heck, talks a lot(blabbering) to so Ciri, who is a stranger btw and go along her whims with meddling with other lives despite knowing she is being hunted by the wild-hunt. He is a doormat with no spine and practically no thoughts behind that head with how dull he think, speak and acts. It has a strong start but the mc refuse to evolve.

2mth 10

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No_Name_Character

Despite its few chapters, I see immense potential in this story. I'm eager to follow its future development. Thank you for bringing us this story, author.

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Belyashio

Oh, this is truly magnificent. The fanfic is well-written and the plot is interesting, keep it up. The only thing is, it would be funny to see Ciri's reaction to the history of the worlds; yours seems so simple. At least in the Warhammer world, her reaction should be interesting, in my opinion, although maybe not. She's not afraid of monsters, unless the gods surprise her. I support her 100% and give her 5 stars. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Keep up the good work and please don't give up.

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Bachingchung

I'm usually not a fan of world hopping since most authors overreach with taking hundreds of chapters. I love that you kept it short and mostly focus on SoL. It's a breathe of fresh air compared to the shounenfication of almost every fanfics here. Bonus point is Cirilla is one of my favorite waifus.

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Daoist_Dan

Let me know if the story past the first 7 chapters is better. I'm not going to keep reading. Mc is a huge simp. Inviting trouble to travel with him because. Explaining everything about his method of world travel to someone not reciprocating anything herself. Because. And setting aside his own journeys desires to let her enjoy competing in a tourney at his expense and also at risk of canon that he definitely cares not to break. Because. I know she's there because his method of travel is magically quieter and less easy to follow by the Hunt. And because he so very completely nice. But there aren't great reasons he is with her in this way. Maybe simping isn't the right word. If Siri was some dude and the story was the same, it would still be a problem. Doormat? Idk. 3.2 5, 4, 2, 2, 3

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Jo_Can

Love this story, really want you to continue. Regardless thanks for sharing what you did.

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Faisal_Galvez

all I can say is, it's a must add on your library list. Some grammar mistakes but negligible.

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Nedrexo

The story is interesting, but if you expect the protagonist to settle down in one place or be extremely strong, you'll be a little disappointed. The protagonist is a traveler, and what he enjoys is traveling.

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David_Mei_6735

I swear the only thing people want from stories in this site is their power fantasies fulfilled, and cry about it when the protagonist doesn't become overpowered and curb stomp everyone in the first 10 chapters lol. (The Westeros Arc was actually my favourite) I for one love the direction and pacing that your taking this story, and tbh the concept of an OC character tagging along Cirri's world jumping is actually the exact kind of story that I have been daydreaming about for a while now lol. P.S. On a small note though, I really don't like how he got super chromed up in the Cyberpunk (most of it is just general distaste to someone willing mutating themselves to become a cyborg). But I'll wait and what you have planned, it could lead to somewhere interesting

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Bra_d

Enjoying the story so far I also hope it won't become a cringe harem. Also their should be plenty of ways for him to become powerful so hopefuly he gets some power boost. It doesnt have to be OP obviously but maybe some kinda super solider serum or something.

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SrVerhen

No geral é muito bom(li atéo 42), mas tenho a sensação que falta algo. Pelo menos pra mim. Parece um pouco sem propósito, a amisade entre o MC e Ciri é um pouco superficial. Fica cansativo.