• Joined Jul 2017
  • United States
  • Secrecy
  • Just passing through.

  • Premier

    Becoming a Premium user

    Endeavor

    Checked in for a total of 360 days

    Who am I?

    Add email and upload avatar

    Cultivator

    Registered for over 1 years

    Such Wealth!

    Obtain a cumulative total of 1,000 Spirit Stones

Report user

Moments

Seriously? This was a long arc and I think we deserve a little more than a nothing ending. You made a hundred chapters of build up so don't let this be the pay off for reading it all. She escapes during the final fight because an outside intervenes and forces things. Wtf? View More
Chrysalis · C396
1 day ago
The other humans probably would have done that if it were possible. I mean cmon. View More

DesertRat: Well, a new hardware/software system would not have the same vulnerability to the virus
Or give your robots their own WAN/protocol channel
Or use your new "Super Alice" to just create new hardware and software firewalls that filter the virus out

But yes, wanting to kill any and all survivors does make it seem like he is the one infected with a virus...

I Found A Planet · C99
1 day ago
Well ok then. I didn't know I reading about a psychopath. Which that isn't something I would normally complain about... but it's more than a little inconsistent. For the first 99 chapters I thought he was a normal person so it's rather jarring to find out he's something completely different on the 100 nth.

I almost want to say this is bad writing? No, scrap that. It IS bad writing. View More
I Found A Planet · C99
1 day ago

Daoist_Dan: Well ok then. I didn't know I reading about a psychopath. Which that isn't something I would normally complain about, but it's more than a little inconsistent. For the first 99 chapters I thought he was a normal person so it's rather jarring to find out he's something completely different on the 100nth. Like, literally the difference happened in the span of 1 chapter to the next. Normal dude thinking about growing his business to "I'll hunt down every survivor on this planet and eradicate them so my control of this planet remains uncontested. I have built a robot army and we are ready to begin expanding our territory outwords. I don't know if anyone has survived the apocalypse, but if I find them they will be killed... blah blah blah exterminate... blah blah blah total control... blah blah blah Chinese greed.

I almost want to say this is bad writing? No, scrap that... It's absolutely bad writing. And it's not like that's really anything new either. There's been moments throughout like being racist towards foreigners or things being too convenient and falling into place for him every time. This is just the final straw. Like I said before I prefer psychopath stories. They behave differently than I would and that makes things interesting. But I also like consistent stories. Make me think he's a decent person and you actually have to put in some work into changing him and developing him into a monster. It can't just snap into place for no reason.

I Found A Planet
1 day ago
Reading Status: C99
Well ok then. I didn't know I reading about a psychopath. Which that isn't something I would normally complain about, but it's more than a little inconsistent. For the first 99 chapters I thought he was a normal person so it's rather jarring to find out he's something completely different on the 100nth. Like, literally the difference happened in the span of 1 chapter to the next. Normal dude thinking about growing his business to "I'll hunt down every survivor on this planet and eradicate them so my control of this planet remains uncontested. I have built a robot army and we are ready to begin expanding our territory outwords. I don't know if anyone has survived the apocalypse, but if I find them they will be killed... blah blah blah exterminate... blah blah blah total control... blah blah blah Chinese greed.

I almost want to say this is bad writing? No, scrap that... It's absolutely bad writing. And it's not like that's really anything new either. There's been moments throughout like being racist towards foreigners or things being too convenient and falling into place for him every time. This is just the final straw. Like I said before I prefer psychopath stories. They behave differently than I would and that makes things interesting. But I also like consistent stories. Make me think he's a decent person and you actually have to put in some work into changing him and developing him into a monster. It can't just snap into place for no reason. View More
I Found A Planet
1 day ago

Turken: China = Spirit of spam, using enormous numbers to overcome individual fails.

Japan = Spirit of craftsman, spending way to much time trying to reach perfection.

USA = Spirit of capitalism, use every thing and method you can as long as you turn a profit.
😆

I Found A Planet · C97
2 days ago
At first I wanted to google the conversion from Yuan to USD until I realized the translator had already done that for me. He actually has $3,000,000 and is talking like that isn't damn near retirement money. View More

darkoneko: " Not much, not even $3,000,000. " well Fuck you too, eh ?

I Found A Planet · C22
2 days ago
There's more than enough stuff to explore if you just stuck with what should be in an Akatsuki system. You don't need all this extra Kekkai-Genkai stealing bullshtery. View More
Akatsuki System in Another World · C3
5 days ago
Pick one dipsht. He either looks arrogant or humble... Can't have it both ways. View More
Against The Gods with an Anime System · C7
5 days ago

Daoist_Dan: ... Then why the fck did you make us read the Pillar Men description? I even went to the wiki to read their racial details.

Endless Adventure · C3
5 days ago
If you want shameless try a story with a million views but no 1-2 star reviews(I really did just go through and check). It doesn't matter how perfect a story is because that just doesn't happen naturally on this site. Can't even say it's because they weren't really reviews because again, 1 million views. Someone at some point must have left a genuine review with 1-2 stars and you still deleted it. Now that's shameless. The closest that remains is some guy that reviewed "......................................." with a 2 1/2 star rating. It's neutral and won't affect ratings either way so that must be why it's still here.

Your as bad as Ghostyz with this bullsht... They don't let authors manage reviews so you can lie to everyone about having a flawless story. They do it because people spam nonsense for exp. You're abusing the system and it defeats the purpose of review sections. This shouldn't be happening and I hope the site takes the privilege back from you authors soon.

There's just no way I can buy this is natural. If it was the math would come out to something like 1 "negative" review to every 100 positive ones which is kind of ridiculous for what it is. Fanfiction is already too opinionated without it being hosted on a site like this one that's always had people with things to say. After 70 chapters someone must have had something to say about what they didn't like especially since I've read some of it and it isn't that great. View More

Zefelina: I will be a bit shameless and review my own story a bit. Though I am not shameless enough to give myself full 5 stars ;]

I wrote this story because I think that Harry Potter, as my favorite book, lacks self inserts in fan-fictions.

I want this story to be from the perspective of purebloods - why they value their traditions, dark magic and their blood. And why they started the war at all.

A lot of the plot will be focused on Draco trying to avoid the 'flags' while not affecting the book's plot. However, whether he succeeds... well that's another question.

Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy
6 days ago
Wtf. Exactly how many chapters have you wasted on their kiddie years? I'm almost 30 in and who knows how many more it'll take before we get to Hogwarts.

It boggles the mind how people can imagine little kids but take it seriously as they discus like adults and do thinks they shouldn't even be doing when they're 16. By that point the believability is shot for me. Why is this a thing? View More
Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C28
6 days ago
I'm not going to pretend to be interested in any of this so I'm skipping right to the Hogwarts years. This is boring. If you've already gotten most of the stuff in place just skip ahead and start writing the important things. I can only imagine kids doing kid stuff for so long until the story starts feeling drawn out and pointless. Like, why shouldn't I just skip ahead to Hogwarts? Will any of this crap I'm missing really matter or could you have gotten away with just the basics.

Cool, the 7 year old is doing muggle business. Could've just mentioned it between Hogwarts years and been done with it. Theo likes to read random books? So interesting... That one girl wanted to go to the zoo? Cool... The girls didn't like the art? That's a real shame...

WHY DOES ANY OF THIS MATTER ENOUGH TO WASTE TIME ON?! View More
Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C11
6 days ago
*A dult View More
Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C6
6 days ago
I'm a little paranoid at how many of his friends are girls. Sure they mature faster and with his more ***** mind it makes sense for that reason... but also girls mature faster if you get what I mean. If this is the birth of his harem I'll be a little disappointed. View More
Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C6
6 days ago
She's mature for her age? Oh, you mean she thinks like an 8 or 9 year old. So impressive. View More
Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C6
6 days ago
The title alone makes me want to skip this chapter. Who cares about his 7 year old friends? View More
Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C6
6 days ago
I couldn't be less interested in the other kids. One is more than enough thank you. So as long as their existences are reserved for brief mentions until Hogwarts that's good in my book.

Also, and again this is way too late... No harems. View More
Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C5
6 days ago

Daoist_Dan: Hold on a second... if there's a branch of magic that could make you live thousands of years just by learning it then wtf was Voldemort doing wasting his time on this side of the planet? For that matter why is anyone? On one hand you have damn near immortality and eternal youth and on the other you have some cool spells. Ok. But you also only have 100-200 years to enjoy it. It's a little too late at this point to warn you against committing to this, but it's a major plot hole that ruins the believability of people wanting to be the british kind of wizard.

Again, the question comes down to this... Do you want to be immortal or do you want your laundry to be more convenient? Do you want to walk on the wind and slay dragons with a sword or do you want to grow old and consume potions to manage whatever ailments you're saddled with over time? Ascension or composting a grave somewhere?

It's an easy answer for anyone.

Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C5
6 days ago
Hold on a second... if there's a branch of magic that could make you live thousands of years just by learning it then wtf was Voldemort doing wasting his time on this side of the planet? For that matter why is anyone? On one hand you have damn near immortality and eternal youth and on the other you have some cool spells. Ok. But you also only have 100-200 years to enjoy it. It's a little too late at this point to warn you against committing to this, but it's a major plot hole that ruins the believability of people wanting to be the british kind of wizard.

Again, the question comes down to this... Do you want to be immortal or do you want your laundry to be more convenient? Do you want to walk on the wind and slay dragons with a sword or do you want to grow old and consume potions to manage whatever ailments you're saddled with over time? Ascension or composting a grave somewhere?

It's an easy answer for anyone. View More
Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C5
6 days ago
You didn't pay attention to what you were reading, did you? View More

Leylin_Farlier: You can't be serious. Mea'hor, ME a WHORE! What the f*ck author? Even if you were going for MAY a WHORE! it still is a sh*tty name.... Is her name a reference to the fact she was raped and used by her previous owner?

Sovereign of the Karmic System · C11
1 week ago

SometimesITalk: The association is kind of funny.. but no. She is called Mea, part of the 'hor descent of the Rulin house. Also, i'm somewhat disappointed by all those likes..

Sovereign of the Karmic System · C11
1 week ago

MrNiko: He's behind on his debt and makes enough money to pay it off but nope let's buy a new house and cultivation materials dumb ass

Sovereign of the Karmic System · C11
1 week ago

DaoistMasterJohn: Wow. Because it is such a good idea to let two beautiful non cultivator girls from the slum wander alone with 10 gold coins on them. Has the MC **** for brains?

Sovereign of the Karmic System · C11
1 week ago
If all it does is speed up the absorption of essence and learning techniques then how is it any different than any of the rest of those systems? It's literally the same thing, the author's just been a little obtuse about it and called it something special sounding. This literally has nothing to do with karma... It's a generic "I make you very strong" system with the missions disguised instead as things you do for "good karma". View More
Sovereign of the Karmic System · C7
1 week ago
Well, it is a crazy long story to get into. I'm not sure exactly how many hours it would take to catch up completely, but if I had to guess it'll take you a couple weeks to a month and that's if you marathoned the episodes everyday(I marathoned the story years ago when the backlog of episodes wasn't "that" bad.). What's really crazy is back in 2014 the author said the story was halfway finished. By that point the story was already 15-16 years old so we still have a decades more of episodes to look forward to lol. And since one One Piece is the most beloved anime in Japan and has been for a decade I don't doubt we'll still be getting other stories based in the world when it's finished.

I get that this isn't the best introduction since the episode count scares a lot of people off but there's a reason so many of us one piece fans have gone through the experience. I highly recommend giving it a try and if by the time the Alabasta arc ends you aren't in love with the story it's likely not worth your time trying anymore. By the point the "spirit" of the show was developed and it's what keeps us fans coming back. View More

faux_critique: Really? I never watched one piece. Are things that bad?😂😂😂

Assassination System · C1
3 weeks ago
This is exactly the issue I was talking about. View More
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C7
1 month ago
This inheritance issue is hard to believe. Problems like this should've stopped happening years ago and the protocols should be completely straightforward and painless. There's only so long you can ask men to die but deny their families the benefits they fought for without revolts and social dissent. It stops being an issue where greedy relatives want money/the government wants to enforce systems that develop young soldiers and it becomes one where soldiers lose confidence in their countries willingness to support their family when they die. That little issue could destroy a country so It's hard to believe the government is still letting this be an issue. I mean, it's THEIR benefits, THEIR money. Would you fight for a country that goes nope the moment you die and redirects your money somewhere they'd prefer it to go? Even sexist fathers should care about this issue, if it's so easy to do with the women in your family then even if it's a little more difficult doesn't that also mean it could be done to your son? The loophole already exists after all and as we've just seen people can make the "But our son has more potential so their benefits should be his" argument. This is a huge fcken issue for what seems like a military dependant country. View More
It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future · C6
1 month ago
That might be one of the dumbest scenes I've ever had the displeasure of reading. So he phased through her and revealed all his secrets... of course he did. Fck off. View More
Obito's Mangekyō in Anime World · C6
1 month ago
No no no, he can't feel things for strangers, don't forget. Tatsuya DIDN'T get a weird feeling. Didn't happen.

I'm skimming past this. There are too many inconsistencies to really enjoy anything that's happening. View More
Obito's Mangekyō in Anime World · C4
1 month ago
Report inappropriate content
error Tip

Report abuse
Report user

Get More
Payment Method paypal

Please switch to the pop-up to complete the payment.

Earn Rewards

Earn Rewards

Earn rewards

by completing the missions

Complete the daily and EXP missions, as well as every week’s reading missions to obtain EXP and SS as rewards.

Learn more about the rules 1. You can obtain the corresponding EXP and Bonus SS as rewards by completing daily missions and EXP missions, as well as weekly reading missions. 2. The obtained EXP can raise your user level. 3. Bonus SS can be used to unlock chapters, gift authors, etc. They are effective for 30 days. 4. Daily Tasks and corresponding rewards renew daily at 00:00 UTC+8. Don't forget to claim your rewards in time. 5. Weekly Reading Missions refer to the time you spend reading novels and comics on Webnovel every week. 6. The weekly reading time is calculated while your device is connected to the Internet. This might result in a delay of several minutes.

Read longer, Earn bigger

Read on the app and claim your rewards!

Get the App

Read anywhere, anytime