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A blooming love: fate and destiny
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Lillian Estrana Carlos , or commonly called Lady Lillian, has been known for her violent nature. Lillian was a noble lady who lived in a kingdom called Astarea. She became even more vicious after her fiancé death. What makes her more enraged is the fact that she discovered the assassin, who is actually a prince. On top of that, she is forced to marry him by the imperial family. She would rather be dead than marry him. Attempted murders and threats to each other are part of her everyday life.
Now she is a member of the imperial family. She lives in luxury and can collect as many jewels as she wants. But would it be worth sacrificing her life?
Life in the palace may seem like a dream come true, but in reality it's a prison in disguise. It was full of lies and heartbreak. There is a secret that has been kept hidden for so long. The ugly truth was desperately covered up by the imperial family.
The palace was full of conflict and traps. A bloodbath would be the order of the day. She lived with her enemies, so she must be careful and meticulous. One wrong move and she'll be dead.
A perfect strategy is important to survive. She needs to get rid of her weakness to come up with a perfect plan. But what if one of her enemies is her weakness? Will she manage to get rid of him?
What is the truth that the imperial family has been afraid of?
Can she discover the secret and rise, or will her death be the end?
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Your grammar is not something that can be understood while reading. I had to look through a sentence about five times to ensure I could understand what you wrote. You started your story in Present tense and ended with Past tense. The tense you start with, should be what you use to end. If I am to continue, I might give you a harsh review so I will end here.
First of all, the grammar of this novel may scare some of the readers, but it's nothing that can't be solved with the use of sites like Grammarly, and some time writing. Second, I couldn't quite understand some important things, like, what is the name of the kingdom where she resides? What is her social position? And why there is a woman called 'queen' that holds more power that the two female consorts? I mean, imperial consorts and queen means the same, so this doesn't make any sense. Third and also my principal problem, is that in this story there isn't a constant narrator. (And that the chapters are rather short) Fourth and last, you're introducing too many characters at the same time, which, to be honest, is confusing me. There's is nothing more that I can say with only 3 chapters, the only thing I can say is that, you shouldn't stop writing, it doesn't matter if you're getting negative reviews, what matters you're liking writing it. (And with this cheesy line, I bookmark this novel!)