A certain God's Chat Group

LV 13

Lize

well.. i thought the mc will stay as a god.. and have his own familia.. while also have a chat group.. if this is the case.. it will be good.. with how the author write the story at the start.. but.. in the author decided to make mc lost his power.. and make mc a shota.. i lost my interest after that.. if only mc stay as a god.. well dunno about the current story.. i will try to continue to read..

LV 4

Noname126

won't lie I am disappointed everything was going well until you made him turn from a god to a elf some people keep saying oh he is still a god he just can't use his powers but here is the thing if he can't use his powers and isn't immortal then he isn't a god stupid I have no problem if author wanted the mc grow his powers with the story but if you want that then don't make him a god in the first place also after Turning into a elf he suddenly became a moron lusting for woman for no reason??

LV 5

Lordmoonlight

won't lie I enjoyed the starting but hate the fall a slp for millions of years for the plot of the story it just made people angry and upset and the fact you change his race from God to high elf just take the title a trashed it

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

I'm sorry, I don't like your story. MC is pathetic, stupid, cuck and chinese rare 💩 The story is... bad, no world background, no plot. So, this is wishes dark fulfillment.

LV 15

oldthrall

Millions of years time skip after 20chaps of “character development”. Why even bother with the 20chaps? Just start with the chat group! It leaves a bad taste when you built up relationships in the beginning only to have a contrived MILLIONS of years hibernation time skip where those people the MC built any relationship with are already getting on with their own lives. Terrible start to the story and quite a waste of time and energy to read because the author trashes his own character development with contrived plot. Any expectations I had into reading an interesting story went down the drain because the author doesnt seem to respect his/her own work.

LV 2

marcelll3214

Gods are not humans with superpowers get it through your thick skulls. There is no plot. Random things are happening for no reason. Mc god of space can teleport and he has to have coordinates to do it. Other gods can prevent Mc from using his powers. Mc is weak wuss. I would call him a Japanese Mc bad fanfiction version...

LV 5

NewManagement

Started out descent at best. But completely changed the story 15chapters in and should be retitled. Becomes predictable and it loses the interesting parts after. Large time skips with nothing interesting

LV 13

Masterofall1

44 chapters in and there is no sign of the chat group whatsoever, if you're gonna make a god danmachi fic, make a god danmachi fic, but the title clearly promises a chat group, and that's nowhere in sight, you promised that you would introduce it in chapter 25ish around there, but clearly, that was a lie. The characters are bland and one-dimensional, there is clearly and lack of direction in which the novel wants to take, as there is no plot development at all within those 44 chapters. Chapters 30-44ish are about fighting slavers and getting invited by the king 14 chapters, FOURTEEN CHAPTERS FOR TWO MINOR PLOT POINTS!!!!! I'm done trying to hope for the chat group to be introduced to get the actual plot rolling, but instead I'm stuck with bland characters, in a bland drawn-out cliche scenario. So, this is my warning to anyone hoping for another good chat group fic, TURN AWAY.

LV 13

srevdar

I really enjoyed it until chapter 20... You essentially introduced several characters and relationships which you simply decided to cut off... Hephastus... Loki... Athena... what was the point??? It was those relationships that got me interested in the story... The Father - Daughter dynamic, the friendship with Athena and the ambiguous relationship with Loki... as if it wasn't bad already, you completely nerfd the MC to the point of him having to become a mortal elf... what was the point of that? Then you sent him to the Lower Realm, when you didn't even do a bit of world building in Heaven... what was the point of that... not only that, but the MC turned into... well... a generic fan fic character that has a Chat Group.... the millions of years time skip was unnecessary, the transformation to a Shota elf was unnecessary, the cut out of all the interesting characters was unnecessary, especially Hephastus... why even make her his step daughter, when you essentially destroyed that plot line a few chapters after. You also mention how he and Loki seem to have feelings for each other, and then destroy that with a time skip... you make Athena take care of him for millions of years and then you destroy that by turning him into a mortal and then send him on his way... Look, I'm not usually one to leave a bad review, but when the story went fron one extreme to another in 20 chapters, I felt the need to write this. Sorry, but I will be droping this.

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UnnamedKing

it's fair i guess i don't feel good giving a story 1 star [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

LV 12

Dertonel

WRYYYYYYYY!! the story's pretty good, i can see some wrong grammars here, and there but it doesn't really bug me. what i'm happy about is that the mc isn't stupid, and wants to be a better version of themselves instead of being beta all the time, and the dude is STILL a god even in that body so there IS a chance he could create a familia. i don't know why y'all being mad at him when he's STILL a god. i'm already satisfied that he adopts kid hephaestus. ps i need more chapters pls good job author

LV 2

NotNootNoot

I don't get how people are defending this, its bad and it's a fact. there's a lot of people dishing out the same criticism, meaning its true and you cant ignore that. stop making the mc op just to nerf them, waste of ur time and effort, waste of our expectations and excitement. whats with the undecisive plot, the relationship is all over the place. It had such a good start but then it became unbearable.

LV 1

RandomDanmachiFan

I love this fanfiction, its not a copy pastw of the standard formula "Reincarnated, op, no idea how i got here but im gonna ignore my past and just follow the plot" I like this book because of how much it focused on MC's interactions with other gods, first of all we have MC building relationships of friendship etc with other gods like Athena, Hephaestus, Loki etc. MC has a developed personality and thinks for himself. Now onto the timeskip, i have no idea why some people are mad. The story takes place in the lower world and by that point MC already got used to Heaven etc so there was no more point to keep the Heaven arc going, time skip the author did i way better than having the MC be awake and just mess around for milions of years. Plus since MC left an inpact on those gods we get to see how they will react once they hear his name or once they learn he obtained a mortal body. Plus I dont think people here realise how OP the MC is since his divinity is that of Space and Time. Even if he cant use his powers rn noone would be dumb enough to mess with the god who controls time and space so nothing was really lost during timeskip. All in all It's a good book, some will like it and some not very much. I myself cant wait for more chapters :D

LV 4

Mang_Juan

It's great novel until chapter 29 to my disappointment mc got nerf to the point where he can only fight with sword or stick. And I'm really angry to point I wanna smack my phone in the wall. English is not my main language and I'm bad in English so I'm sorry if there wrong But it's great fanfic novel

LV 5

Chouzenfox

The writing quality is good, the stability is bad, the story development? what development?, character design? started out fine, but after that he fell into a well and was buried. and the background is not created by the author, it's already danmachi.

LV 11

monil

Ahaha I don't know why but I'm always waiting for this fanfic XD 😅😊 I wish you would update again

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fetishman

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Sleepy_Ashura

Man you have done a great job with this new background play and information. This novel really interests me. I hope that you work even more proficiently and we get more chapter. Hope the following story is at par eith background you ahve created. 😍🤩😊😊

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FOX_ZRS

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