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After arriving in the world of Danmachi, a horrifically tortured soul may finally have found a place to call home.
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names are all wrong, makes me think author-san watched in a non english sub also mc is not a demon, that part realy made me sad other then that, great story
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good story, few spelling mastaks but overall good. but when you making more chapters.
Writing quality is okay and it has long chapters. Story wise tragic overdramatic backstory with no real reason behind it beside .MC acting .angsty sometimes and the next he dies a . schizophrenic 180 and he doesnt care for some time. MC seemed forced behaviourwise in a lot of ways. synopsis seems a bit wrong for the MC description but so far he doesnt seem "special" except the random angst backstory.
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I like this, most of the names are wrong and there are a few spelling mistakes but I still like this
not a story for me, names are wrong and there are a few spelling mistakes, but readable grammar wise. The same can not be said about the story itself. Author wanted to create a tragic backstory for the mc, but failed to do so. Usually people have a reason to hate you, but all the people of mc's hometown like to torture him and try to kill him ? Without a reason just to create a sad or tragic backstory. Its so illogical, that I can't see it as an tragic backstory. There was just this one point on the authors checklist everything else wasn't important. Unreasonable... but the mc has a ''tragic'' past. Illogical... but the mc has a ''tragic'' past. No deepens... but the mc has a ''tragic'' past. I think you got my point ....it's annoying, but that's not the worst part after his world travel the mc acts like nothing ever happened.. like no problems at all. Showing off his scars like they are some trophies just to spam I am an escaped slave and my owners weren't nice. It's comparable to that's my ninja way or dattebayo. Yeah too tired to continue.