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Ada has always hated James, but what happens when they become soul mates, will she give it up to protect what matters most or will she lose it. And what happens when someone else enters the picture.
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Write a reviewDear Author, The start felt a bit rushed, but that's ok. From the two chapters I cannot judge or say anything specific. But I liked the conversations the characters had. Keep it up !
The prologue is really sad, but can't wait to read more. I love seing new author's stories and I know how hard it must be to come up with something original right off the bat. [img=recommend]
Great start to the novel, prologue draws you in with questions very easily. The novel is dialogue heavy so far but it’s done well, it’s quite a refreshing style actually. Lots of potential and worth the read so far!
If you enjoy teen drama with school arc, then you give this novel a shot. It has few chapters, so I can't dive deep in the plot to give a nice analyze. To improve: Writing Quality: It has some minor issues that broke off the flow a little bit. I recommend the usage of Wordtune and Hemingway when rewriting. All in all, keep up the good work :)
A good start. A note for the author, the prologue currently isn't visible, as it's hidden in volume 0, so readers currently start at the chapter immediately after the prologue.
This novel really has some good conversations and perfect grammar, And the story is also interesting. The characters are all also good. Need more chapters. Keep up the good work author
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I hope you guy's enjoy reading this as much as I did writing this, please feel free to leave a review and let me know your thoughts on my writing, if you have any ideas or constructive criticism I welcome them with open arms.