/ Fantasy / A Maiden's Frozen Heart
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What if you knew the future? But what if that future was not yours?
Sixteen-year-old Lady Maura is the unwanted “half-blood” of an impoverished noble family in Lafeara. More than anything in the world, Maura just wants to survive, but the number of secrets she carries threaten her life at every turn. For one, her real name is Carina, and she’s not originally from this world.
Carina was reborn in Lafeara with a frozen heart that makes her immune to physical pain while granting her the power of ice magic. Now she must use Maura’s memories to protect herself from the Turnbell family, hunt down the assassin named Ghost, and change her future.
All her plans begin to unravel when Carina is forced to use her magic to defend herself. Now a priest and his witch hunter are on her trail. As more bodies pile up in the wake of this witch hunt and the future continues to change beyond her control, Carina can only pray that her identity as a witch remains a secret.
After all, they still burn witches in Lafeara.
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This story has original characters, an original twist on "another world" transmigration, an exciting plot development that keeps you on the edge of your seat, great dialogue, awesome descriptions, and really just grips the reader from the very first page! I hope the writer will continue to update more chapters! I am looking forward to more of Maura's story!
I'm giving this 5 stars. This book is well written, and the flow and world development are detailed. I absolutely love it. I'm adding this to my library so that I can get notified of the future chapters. I highly recommend this to everyone who also loves bad-ass characters. The author is an amazing writer! I'll be waiting for the next updates.
Overall writing and world building is excellent! The author is way good with his words almost as if he is real professional! Keep up the good work! 5stars
I love it! The flow of the story makes it easier for me to read on phone, and you provided sufficient world background for me to understand. First webnovel to be added to my collection ehe
Genuine review swap: I'm honestly in love with your descriptions. The beginning hooked me instantly. You captured the foreboding mood of your story perfectly with the dialogue. It's easily digestible and it really flows. An honest 5.0 from me. Really looking forward to how the events will unfold!
Hah... Being honest, I can only say... It's unexpected. I can't deny I've had some "apprehension" due to the female protagonist and LGBT tag but man. This is legit one of the best stories I've saw on webnovel, the grammar barely has any errors and the writing quality is inpeccable, can't deny that seeing the huge gap between our writing has broadned my horizons (and kicked my self confidence in the balls). Also, it was pretty clever of that time-skip after her reincarnation since you wouldn't need to write her adaptation on this new world. Honestly, I was planning to drop the story after the review but I decided to stick with it despite its theme that I'm not fond off. Good joob! The only nitpicking of mine is the lack of description of certain characters
I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes. The characters were interesting and entertaining. The plot starts off quickly but the writer does fill you in on what you need to know within the first few chapters. I like that some things are kept a mystery, but not at the expense of the plot. Adding to my collection to keep up with the updates. The author seems to update daily and sometimes more than once! Keep up the good work!
This story has a lot of potential and its refreshing to see a fresh twist on the whole transmigration into another world. It has assassins, the MC literally puts a hit on a prince in the first couple of chapters. It has magic which we see bit by bit though I'm sure we've yet to see Maura's full magical powers. It has SO MUCH DRAMA you can literally sick your teeth into it. The dialogue and descriptions make me feel like I'm in the story with the MC. Sometimes I even forget that I'm reading the story and that's when you know you've found something amazing! Great work Author!
The story is very interesting, I really love the way the characters are described and the plotting is pretty unique, keep up the good job author.
This book really catches my interest. I like the flow of the story and the way you used all of those descriptive words. Keep up the good work 👍
The synopsis is interesting, you can really catch up with the plot just with that. I was intrigued by the first chapter, you can really feel the emotions that the author wants you to feel, whether be it suspense or even criticizing its characters. I also like the way how the author transitions. There is just one thing that I am a bit bothered, although it's only on a personal level. The author's use of em dash (—) is a bit abused, maybe lessen the frequency on each chapter and make it a minimum of 1 em dash if you're going to use it on a line. I don't know if it's simply just the writing style of the author but it's just my suggestion anyway. Overall, the novel has visible potential, I'm wishing you good luck on this and keep on having fun writing it.
The book is well-written with the use of attention-grabbing descriptive words. I am not good with grammar, therefore I am uncertain if this book has any typos and errors. For the spelling, however, I have not seen any misspelled words. I assume that the author updates daily, so I will rate the stability of updates with five stars. The descriptions are vivid and unique especially when describing each scenario. I have nothing to complain about when it comes to character development and world background. The characteristics of both the characters and the setting were able to grab my attention. As for the story development, there are currently six chapters so I can't decide if the story has a fast or slow pace. Still, I'll be giving this category five stars. Overall: This story is amazing and attention-grabbing. I highly recommend this novel to everyone who is obsessed with the fantasy genre. Keep up the good work author!
I'm your 10th review! Yay! First of all your story is fantastic! I am so invested in Carina/Maura's future. How is she going to get away from her family? What is the deal with Lord Percy? Is he a good guy or a bad guy? So many questions and reasons to come back for more so looking forward to your next update!