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meixiaolian

I like the way you write because it is detailed. Tari is cute btw, she is my fave character in your book :)) The way you write the background and the emotions is a TEN out of TEN. Keep writing :))

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ssun_ara

I really like any historical romance story and this unusual concept really hooked me in! The author really do a great job! I want to read more and added to my library. Definitely gonna recommend this to my friends!

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ReinaRay729

Absolutely in love with this this story. The author did a spectacular job sculpting out the background along with it's development and the development of the characters. Very detailed and kept me wanting to read more and more, 10 out of 10!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Toriatim

The hype around this book has been questionable and admittedly, that made me both eager to her my hands on it and excited to read it. I really love historical book and just from the synopsis, I got my inspiration. You guys should read this book

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Novelcat_Wind

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Sara_Wilcox

I love this freaking story! Tari is so awesome. The childhood background is so sweet! The world and character details really suck you into the story! I’m keeping this book in my library even after it’s finished! Well done author!!!

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amy_raines

I absolutely love this story. There are few to no mistakes. The plot draws you in so that you want to keep reading more. I will definitely continue reading every chapter of this!

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AGirlHasNoName20

This is such a creative story. I really loved how I just could feel the effort you put in describing this world, the different characters and their interactions. Plus, the cultures! It was so beautiful how you used so many of them, making your story completely colorful and interesting. I'll definitely keep reading. Amazing job and good luck!

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SleepyKola

Amazing! Such an interesting plot, I really like how the collaboration between Korea and Egypt🤩🤩 The details are really detailed, please keep updating, I'm waiting for the upcoming chapters!!🤭😆

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Sabin_Subedi_Fei

I'll be honest here, love and romance aren't my types, but this story playing fate and love brought me closer to this type. I like how the author is designing his characters and story well. Mc is like overpowered character from the start and this is what I love most. Overall this book author is playing well with romance

3yr
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TrinityPhoenix

The first sentence on the synopsis made me aww the characters. It's cute! Also, a great start at the beginning of your story! I like the characters as well. Writing is okay, but just a little bit of putting the dot (.) and comma (,) at the right places. I think the author can fix that so it's fine with me. Overall it's all good. Keep up the good work author!

3yr
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Oemar_danoes

I really appreciated the concept and the charming scenes between the princes and the princess. The only problem at this point is the English feature could be enough, but other than that I'm hopeful about the romance!

3yr
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Nicole_99

The plot alone drew me in.☺️ It really reminded me of that one comic where a girl was transported back to Ancient Egypt and had a romance of a lifetime under the guise of Nefertari. Regardless, this story which is based in Ancient Korea(Goryo(?) I assume) is also fascinating. I enjoyed reading about the character's initial meeting. Tbh, the first chapter felt a little lengthy to read but the visualization was on point.👏 On a side note, there were a few redundant words, or sentences that could be phrased differently. Eg: "drought without rain" is basically redundant because drought already holds the meaning that there had been no rain and the weather was very hot. Aside from that. This is a beautifully structured and intriguing story. A lovely addition to my library. 😉

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JP_TransLaLa

How does this not have 100 ratings yet? It's well-written, beautifully develops its characters, and has an incredibly rich and well researched world! I'll be reading this on the regular, that's for sure!

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Mohamdessaam

I love how deep and rich this story is, it's very relatable, and feels totally real. Not boring and not fake either,it's so powerful what an imagination it couldn't be much better ❤❤ for the writer your so smart, have a beautiful mind absolutely sensational ❤ Really thank you for this amazing work ❤ A+ Work!

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videogameslover

It keeps drawing you in for more and more. Love this story I will keep reading it over and over! The story is addiciting I couldnt stop reading it! I love reading about Egypt and times from then.

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Jwcwwd

Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

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An0nymous

It's great! By ch 7 I was pretty much emotionally attached to the main cast and the story and lore is very interesting! Writing quality's getting better and better, updates are quite stable and I love the character descriptions! Can't wait for more chapters!

3yr
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MichelleLeeee

I absolutely love this story. The author does a great job in making you feel connected to his characters. Though there are many, you can see why they are important as the story continues to advance. The history of the King of Egypt’s past is interesting and sometimes intense. The FL is independent and cares deeply for her father. The ML is sweet and has integrity. I enjoy the childhood friendship between them and I fell in love with little Ashkan so far and the direction this story is going. I’m excited to see where this story goes. I can picture the story in my mind and that, for me, is a great storyteller. The only issue that I have would be some errors in punctuation and grammar, but those can be easily overlooked. A fantastic read by the author! A must read for romance fantasy with a dollop of action and betrayal.

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SamsaraWithWords

I really enjoyed the concept and the cute scenes between the princes and the princess. The only issue at this point is the English quality could be better, but other than that I'm optimistic about the romance!

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meixiaolian

I like the way you write because it is detailed. Tari is cute btw, she is my fave character in your book :)) The way you write the background and the emotions is a TEN out of TEN. Keep writing :))

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ssun_ara

I really like any historical romance story and this unusual concept really hooked me in! The author really do a great job! I want to read more and added to my library. Definitely gonna recommend this to my friends!

3yr
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ReinaRay729

Absolutely in love with this this story. The author did a spectacular job sculpting out the background along with it's development and the development of the characters. Very detailed and kept me wanting to read more and more, 10 out of 10!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Toriatim

The hype around this book has been questionable and admittedly, that made me both eager to her my hands on it and excited to read it. I really love historical book and just from the synopsis, I got my inspiration. You guys should read this book

2yr
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Novelcat_Wind

hello,dear writer, I am the novel editor of NovelCat, wind. After reading your appealing novel here, I sincerely invite you to join us as an honorary NovelCat author, let's give your book more chances! once your book gets exclusive contracted with our platform, you can get lots of bonuses! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: wind@novel-cat.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.

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Sara_Wilcox

I love this freaking story! Tari is so awesome. The childhood background is so sweet! The world and character details really suck you into the story! I’m keeping this book in my library even after it’s finished! Well done author!!!

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amy_raines

I absolutely love this story. There are few to no mistakes. The plot draws you in so that you want to keep reading more. I will definitely continue reading every chapter of this!

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AGirlHasNoName20

This is such a creative story. I really loved how I just could feel the effort you put in describing this world, the different characters and their interactions. Plus, the cultures! It was so beautiful how you used so many of them, making your story completely colorful and interesting. I'll definitely keep reading. Amazing job and good luck!

3yr
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SleepyKola

Amazing! Such an interesting plot, I really like how the collaboration between Korea and Egypt🤩🤩 The details are really detailed, please keep updating, I'm waiting for the upcoming chapters!!🤭😆

3yr
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Sabin_Subedi_Fei

I'll be honest here, love and romance aren't my types, but this story playing fate and love brought me closer to this type. I like how the author is designing his characters and story well. Mc is like overpowered character from the start and this is what I love most. Overall this book author is playing well with romance

3yr
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TrinityPhoenix

The first sentence on the synopsis made me aww the characters. It's cute! Also, a great start at the beginning of your story! I like the characters as well. Writing is okay, but just a little bit of putting the dot (.) and comma (,) at the right places. I think the author can fix that so it's fine with me. Overall it's all good. Keep up the good work author!

3yr
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Oemar_danoes

I really appreciated the concept and the charming scenes between the princes and the princess. The only problem at this point is the English feature could be enough, but other than that I'm hopeful about the romance!

3yr
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Nicole_99

The plot alone drew me in.☺️ It really reminded me of that one comic where a girl was transported back to Ancient Egypt and had a romance of a lifetime under the guise of Nefertari. Regardless, this story which is based in Ancient Korea(Goryo(?) I assume) is also fascinating. I enjoyed reading about the character's initial meeting. Tbh, the first chapter felt a little lengthy to read but the visualization was on point.👏 On a side note, there were a few redundant words, or sentences that could be phrased differently. Eg: "drought without rain" is basically redundant because drought already holds the meaning that there had been no rain and the weather was very hot. Aside from that. This is a beautifully structured and intriguing story. A lovely addition to my library. 😉

3yr
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JP_TransLaLa

How does this not have 100 ratings yet? It's well-written, beautifully develops its characters, and has an incredibly rich and well researched world! I'll be reading this on the regular, that's for sure!

3yr
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Mohamdessaam

I love how deep and rich this story is, it's very relatable, and feels totally real. Not boring and not fake either,it's so powerful what an imagination it couldn't be much better ❤❤ for the writer your so smart, have a beautiful mind absolutely sensational ❤ Really thank you for this amazing work ❤ A+ Work!

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videogameslover

It keeps drawing you in for more and more. Love this story I will keep reading it over and over! The story is addiciting I couldnt stop reading it! I love reading about Egypt and times from then.

3yr
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Jwcwwd

Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

3yr
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An0nymous

It's great! By ch 7 I was pretty much emotionally attached to the main cast and the story and lore is very interesting! Writing quality's getting better and better, updates are quite stable and I love the character descriptions! Can't wait for more chapters!

3yr
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The_Procrastinator

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MichelleLeeee

I absolutely love this story. The author does a great job in making you feel connected to his characters. Though there are many, you can see why they are important as the story continues to advance. The history of the King of Egypt’s past is interesting and sometimes intense. The FL is independent and cares deeply for her father. The ML is sweet and has integrity. I enjoy the childhood friendship between them and I fell in love with little Ashkan so far and the direction this story is going. I’m excited to see where this story goes. I can picture the story in my mind and that, for me, is a great storyteller. The only issue that I have would be some errors in punctuation and grammar, but those can be easily overlooked. A fantastic read by the author! A must read for romance fantasy with a dollop of action and betrayal.

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SamsaraWithWords

I really enjoyed the concept and the cute scenes between the princes and the princess. The only issue at this point is the English quality could be better, but other than that I'm optimistic about the romance!

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