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"One kiss wouldn't hurt, right?"
All Emilie wanted was to get home and wrap herself in her warm blanket with a packet filled with sugary heaven from her Dad's bakery, but it seemed fate had other plans.
Paired up with a boy who was physically incapable of love, and she who only knew so much from movies and novels, Emilie Bernard and Daniel Kim were given a task to help speed up the process of romance for others.
And if they failed, it could spell disaster for love and humanity as we knew it.
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Reveal SpoilerAmazing, this is one good book! The plots and style of writing amaze me, i definitely felt the emotions and characteristic of the character! Good work author! Keep it up!
Reveal SpoilerIntriguing, beguiling, and interesting. The story has a face pace that takes you into the story with it. It's not really a bad thing as I think it might slow down a bit to introduce the characters. but, hey! it's pretty good. Hopefully, you'll keep writing. Would recommend this to any kind of reader out there.
Intriguing synopsis! You have a way of catching the attention of your readers. I hope you could update more so I could have a go on giving it a detailed review, but for now I'll just have it in my library.
Cute Story! This kind of gives me some romantic perspective where it leads me somewhere I already grasped, or read in a while. It's short to review I wish I could read more. But all in all, this is doing pretty good.
Ok, so a very nice beginning. It is very relatable (the club thing), so I would definitely see where this goes. The font in the beginning paragraphs is different. Maybe italicize it if it wasn't planned. Good job.
With only one chapter, it's hard to give it a solid review. Well, you got a strong start for a romance level, albeit being super cliche in their meeting. I could also tell that there's some fantasy involved in the book so that's something to look forward to as well. As I said, it's hard to give a review with only one chapter. ML's name doesn't sit quite right with me, probably by how common the name Daniel and the surname Kim is. I've seen it in countless books and I probably got tired of it. Still, it's just my personal preference so don't mind it that much. Also, punishment for secretly eating and not joining a club is too severe for a normal school. I'd say put a more concrete reason so she had to attend club no matter what. It could be an accident, or suddenly breaking something, or maybe disrespecting the principal... I don't know, but something that light doesn't deserve a punishment of that severity. That said, there are little to no issues in your book since it's just the first chapter. Although if you're planning to make this a series, I'd suggest using past or past perfect tenses for your verbs. There are books that use simple present tense and successful ones at that like Hunger games trilogy but it's hard to keep it consistent. You don't have to change it since it's fine as it is, but keep in mind that it will get harder the longer you write. Those are just my two cents though. Still, the first chapter is off on a good start. There are always things to improve on though. :) And as I always say, anyone can write, but those who take a step forward is already a cut above others. Keep writing and your efforts won't go in vain. Keep it up, author! ^o^
Reveal SpoilerNot typically a fan of romance genre but I kinda want to see where it goes. Good story, able to hook me in the first chapter. Good luck writing!
It has a good start, not enough chapter to give it a detailed review, but the fist chapter ended up in a good cliffhanger, If base from that, i could say that you have a way of making things interesting. UPdate more so I could give another of your story and give another review.
There's been a lot in this first chapter and the best thing about it is the mystery that has been set up, and I've also got to wonder about who the characters are to just walk into some bright light that could potentially kill them.
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Well, damn. Let me have the honour of being the first review of this amazing book. Despite only having 1 chapter out right now, I can say that this is a book of a great potential. I was hooked from the very first chapter, and can't stop begging for next! The way you wrote the opening of the story is *chefkiss*👌 I really wish there were hundred of chapters instead of just one *sigh*. Please update more, I will be waiting. Added to my library! Great job, like, really!