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Our Mc Peter is sent in the world of ONE PIECE with three wishes as luffy's twin brother . Let's watch as make his way to the top as the straw hats first mate .
disclaimer : I do not own One Piece or any charachter coming from it
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Yo it's the author, I wanted to say that the major ideas have been on fanfiction.com . I base myself from "one piece: mad world" by Slicksick, even though it's only 10 chapter but each chapter have at least 30k words . There is also "Chance to start over again" by Mitsuki Hikaru. I really enjoyed them so ho check out if you didn't .
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This story is pretty bad. The grammar is poor and the stories pacing is all over the place. There was no foundation building for the story at all. Each of the major starting events were wrapped up in a few sentences. Overall it is a completely rushed story that I do not recommend.
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