Age of Mana

In the year 2030 the Second Big Bang brings mana into the universe. The universe is changed and expanded by the mana causing monsters and demons to roam the earth.
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A young crow, more intelligent than its peers, was killed by a forest fire the day of the Second Big Bang. Years later the crow would reawaken to find itself as a newly birthed phoenix. With the help of a fire spirit the phoenix will gain strength and survive in this chaotic world.
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This is my first novel so I would appreciate constructive criticism. However if you don't like it don't read it. Don't waste both of our time. Thank you and I look forward to it.