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You're writing in script type format for me its ok. The story flow is a bit rush. Lack of details and feelings inside each scenes. You can at least describe Viscount and Ruby's appearances and their current feelings inside a situation. Remember, readers are reading text/words and not watching a movie. Well for me script type format is ok as long as it was ellaborated well. I like the humor inside their conversation this will give a big contribution to improve your story. Goodluck.
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A script format? Interesting. It's like Harry Potter and the Cursed Child. I see how you're trying to elaborate the scenes, but with the script format, it's extremely difficult to do, in which the scenes and plot flow just get rushed unnecessarily. A bit cheesy, but that's okay. I'll be frank with the star rating, but I can say, good luck, fellow author! You may not reach Top 20, but this work of yours ain't a bad start. Trust me, I've done worse. XD