Synopsis
Amaya is a girl who had been followed by misfortune since birth. Through a chain of unlucky event, she loses her job and goes home in a fit of depression. Thinking back on how unlucky her life has always been, she slumps over on her bed, wishing to dissapear.
When she awoke the next morning she found herself in a forest. Soon, she learns this forest isn't normal, and neither is the new world she's in.
(Rework and editing in progress but still available to read)
This Is the Original Version of The Story.
May contain stiff writting and bad story-telling or errors.
This plot completley differs from the improved version.
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Amazing so talented . can’t stop reading once i started i just could not put this down i have To saY im not a Big fan of reading but this Got me !
The first half of the story feels repetitive and poorly written. There are also many mistakes. it does get better in the second half tho. Alot of detail on how things work in the world. It's basically what you'd expect from most fantasy type novels. it's not a complete a bad thing but the plot is kinda of jumping all over the place but It looks like that's just because of the MC's luck.
Your not too bad at writing but sometimes it seems repetitive and stiff, not too bad though. You updat a lot, which I like, I hat waiting. Also the character development seems kinda sucky at first but as I kept going on it got better. Also, I Wish you would add more detail to the world.
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