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ZeyaSay
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Replied to Revenge_Knightess Ah, understanable. It may be lacking in a few departments as it was something I started when I was first beggining to write.
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Replied to Revenge_Knightess Oh. Yes, that's his introduction. Catch any mistakes or such?
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Replied to Revenge_Knightess Sorry, I'm pretty bad understanding abbreviations. If you'll rephrase the question, I'd be more than happy to answer.
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Replied to DogPerson I try not to add plot armor but, I guess I'm just bad at writting because I'm fairly new that I unintentionally do it. However, thank you for your patience.
If you have anymore comments, suggestion or questions, be sure to write them down.
Thank you ^_^
ch 0 3 Dire Wolves
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Replied to DogPerson Thank you for your patience and continuing to read through. First, i'd like to point out that the confusion I have caused to you was due to me leaving out some big details. The details being that the adventurers also recieve money from items and boss orbs from the dungeons they clear through-out the month.
Platinum-rank=160,000$}
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Replied to DogPerson I'm not sure if I have already replied to this comment or not but, I see the misunderstanding here. D-rankers can have an overall ranging from 999 or lower, though most are around the 500 range. Katsuya, at this point in this story has an overall of 182, meaning he is more so at the bottom of the powerscale.
And about the wound that Katsuya had recived in his leg,I just realized I left out a major detail that the bite didn't seem to be that deep or didn't cause that big of a wound.
And yes, I do agree with the part that the government in my created world is sloppy. This was intentional and is mention sometime later on in the story. But, most of the reason for them being sloppy mainly has to do with the lore of monster in this world being new.
If you have any more questions, opinions or suggestions, be sure to leave a comment and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.
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ch 0 3 Dire Wolves
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Replied to DogPerson I don't think I will be removing any of your comments. Well, not until I fix the issues first.
Again, thank you for pointing out my mistakes.
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Replied to DogPerson You're right, reader first. I should add a little more as to what that is. Thank you for the help ^_^
But there were adventurers just as strong in the "Alternate World".
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Replied to DogPerson Hm ,hearing this comparison is certainly a first. Thank you for the comment ^_^
"As you can see, there is a building behind that now lies in ruins. From what witness have told us is that a group of monsters began rampaging through the city. That's when the Platinum-rank adventurer, Eiji showed up. Luckily, he was able to defeat the monsters, stopping further damage."
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Replied to DogPerson Though most of the stuff in this comment didn't make too much sense to me. But, I do understand the beginning part though. Thank you for the comment. ^_^
"Time for my daily exercise. 5 sets of 30 push ups."
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Replied to DogPerson After reading back, I could not find where Genzo had said he was D-rank. I most likley got you confused with my sloppy story-telling. My apologies.
She then spoke "It's okay, my father is pretty strong for only being a c-rank."
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Replied to Whoops, a typo. Thank you for pointing it out.
She then spoke "It's okay, my father is pretty strong for only being a c-rank."
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Replied to DogPerson It is there under 'Atk'
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Replied to DogPerson You are right, my reasoning while writing this part had totally slipped my mind.However, there is no plot armor in this particularpart of the story. This is one mistake I probobly would have not noticed if you did not point it out. Again, I thank you for the helpfull comments.
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Replied to My apologize.I noticed the spam of comments from you pointing out a lot of mistakes and such. I have noticed most of the thing you have pointed out. Keep in mind this story is still in the procces of being edited and some details I have left out have caused certain pointsin the story to make no sense.But I do greatly thank you for your helpfull opinions as if helps me grow as an author and realize my wrongs. If yo do happen to notice any more mistakes please point them out. And do not hesitate to be be brutally honest, it helps.
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Replied to Masterpiece17 In the guild they are ranked A-rank or less. They haven't received any promotions yet. But if you mean what rank they should be considered in power then I'll be sure to add that.
Hector - Level: 191/??? |Hp: 6,234 | Int: 111 | Mp: 861 | Atk: 3,124 | Speed: 273 | Endurance: 951 ]
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Replied to WebnovelCreator101 Ah, no worries. Your comments are helpful overall.
"Um, sorry, I don't remember having any kids." He replied.
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Replied to WebnovelCreator101 Oh no, lol. Well, if you do decode to continue, I'll be there to read ^_^
"Um, sorry, I don't remember having any kids." He replied.
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ch 13 Final Fight, Then A Goodbye
Amaya In Another World
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