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Let's just say this is very interesting fanfic with a unique mc, the character portrayal is kind of confusing as his goals are not clear like he says he wishes to have a lazy life then why he is opting for the position of the clan leader, The position of clan leader is not a joke you can't just take it for your advantage and throw it after you use it(well you can do that but it requires certain scenarios like #ruthless mc, # anti hero, etc related to an evil plotline), so this whole thing made his character demented and unreadable. See I am not saying that this fic is bad or something in fact what I say is this is good but could have been much better with a comprehensible mc well that's all I have to say and lastly read the fic, If you are someone who regularly reads naruto fic then you will find it quite interesting for a change(the last line is for veteran readers) and nothing much to say I shall end my boring and brooding review and
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In my opinion Mr author is fated to be treat as long as he continues Oh BTW the mha teaser is great pls make it Lol [img=recommend][img=recommend]
it's really a great work that has me fixed on it. the writing is really good as well as the story development. I hope you continue with it till the end cause it's amazing!!!
Of all the novels of the naruto world. This novel is what gives the nuances of life, with each story containing emotion. Good novels. ............................................... ...............................................
If this is your first ff, I am not gonna believe you. You just showed the bond between a grandfather and grandson which can't be received later they pass away and the time spent together and I believe many cried at the chapter 16. I respect you from my heart and thank you for reminding the time I spent with my grandfather.
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Its been a long time since I've written a review but I chose to write one for this because it has a lot of potential !!! I usually just leave a few comments after a chapter but this story is a well balanced fic with emotions being pretty well portrayed...So give this one a read without fail and PLEASE DO NOT DROP THIS FIC RIKLENT SAMA !!!
dude your are doing an awesome job thi is a great novel . Loved it 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😊😊😊😊🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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add bleach elements plzzz💔💔😢. thank u for writing. i am having fun reading your story. 😍❤ ******************************************************************
Amazing the personality is really likeable although it can change because he’s stil jong hope not really like this personality it’s also has a unique touch and I really like the iaijutsu 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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Bitte j[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]ein harmen
Great story Interesting developments so far, has been a real fun read Excellent writing quality and length, has been a joy to read compared to 99% of other fanfiction on this site Character feel very real and fleshed out Overall a great experience and would highly recommend.
I hate this story, let's be honest, if you found out your newborn child was possessed by the soul of an adult, you would throw it in a river, I would. There is no way anyone would be that sympathetic, especially since the "child" killed your daughter. But I can't give you a bad grade, I don't like what you did, but that doesn't mean it's a bad story. Thanks for the chapters
pretty good book man, its looking like its gonna be a bomb. not giving full stars cause only 2 chapters so far so ill wait a while to edit and complete the review. keep it up author
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Shameless review But In all seriousness, any criticism is greatly appreciated so please don't shy away from writing it. Hope you enjoy my story :)
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Let's just say this is very interesting fanfic with a unique mc, the character portrayal is kind of confusing as his goals are not clear like he says he wishes to have a lazy life then why he is opting for the position of the clan leader, The position of clan leader is not a joke you can't just take it for your advantage and throw it after you use it(well you can do that but it requires certain scenarios like #ruthless mc, # anti hero, etc related to an evil plotline), so this whole thing made his character demented and unreadable. See I am not saying that this fic is bad or something in fact what I say is this is good but could have been much better with a comprehensible mc well that's all I have to say and lastly read the fic, If you are someone who regularly reads naruto fic then you will find it quite interesting for a change(the last line is for veteran readers) and nothing much to say I shall end my boring and brooding review and
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In my opinion Mr author is fated to be treat as long as he continues Oh BTW the mha teaser is great pls make it Lol [img=recommend][img=recommend]
it's really a great work that has me fixed on it. the writing is really good as well as the story development. I hope you continue with it till the end cause it's amazing!!!
Of all the novels of the naruto world. This novel is what gives the nuances of life, with each story containing emotion. Good novels. ............................................... ...............................................
If this is your first ff, I am not gonna believe you. You just showed the bond between a grandfather and grandson which can't be received later they pass away and the time spent together and I believe many cried at the chapter 16. I respect you from my heart and thank you for reminding the time I spent with my grandfather.
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Its been a long time since I've written a review but I chose to write one for this because it has a lot of potential !!! I usually just leave a few comments after a chapter but this story is a well balanced fic with emotions being pretty well portrayed...So give this one a read without fail and PLEASE DO NOT DROP THIS FIC RIKLENT SAMA !!!
dude your are doing an awesome job thi is a great novel . Loved it 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😊😊😊😊🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
add bleach elements plzzz💔💔😢. thank u for writing. i am having fun reading your story. 😍❤ ******************************************************************
Amazing the personality is really likeable although it can change because he’s stil jong hope not really like this personality it’s also has a unique touch and I really like the iaijutsu 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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Bitte j[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]ein harmen
Great story Interesting developments so far, has been a real fun read Excellent writing quality and length, has been a joy to read compared to 99% of other fanfiction on this site Character feel very real and fleshed out Overall a great experience and would highly recommend.
I hate this story, let's be honest, if you found out your newborn child was possessed by the soul of an adult, you would throw it in a river, I would. There is no way anyone would be that sympathetic, especially since the "child" killed your daughter. But I can't give you a bad grade, I don't like what you did, but that doesn't mean it's a bad story. Thanks for the chapters
pretty good book man, its looking like its gonna be a bomb. not giving full stars cause only 2 chapters so far so ill wait a while to edit and complete the review. keep it up author
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Shameless review But In all seriousness, any criticism is greatly appreciated so please don't shy away from writing it. Hope you enjoy my story :)