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And So, The Conquest Began.
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"Hello ladies and gents, I well come you to our countries Expo!"
"Welcome, esteemed guests. I urge you to listen to our presentation, starting in five minutes."
5 minutes later...
"Hello, Guests.."
At the end.
"And now, if you wish to see a live show, I welcome you to stay for 5 minutes."
Five minutes later, outside.
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"The man walked to the bridge,
"All fleets ready?" He asked.
"Humanitarian fleet one, active!"
"Humanitarian fleet two, active!"
"Humanitarian fleet three, active!"
Later on, he was asked why he was doing this...
He said.
"To further the conquest of Humanity..."
So, light the flames of conquest, sound the drums and Journey into the world of Space!
This is my first book here, I welcome criticism and for your information, it will probably have bad grammar plus it is in fact written by a 12-year-old...
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And not the bad tempo you asked yourself the author, 2 chapters in every two days !!! I am a newcomer to writing novels, IMHO, the first chapters should be clinging so that it is clear what it is about, so that there is intrigue, so that I would like to read, so that the main character is clear. Of course, each author has his own vision of the development of the storyline, while doing so. A bit confusing, different genres ... fiction, tech, and then elves ... but maybe this is such a new genre? It is too early to evaluate the work .... but the idea of combining a high-tech world with an archaic such as the world of elves may be something new. The author of success!
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