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Arata begins his journey in his ninja world... with a system
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Write a reviewwell the storyline so interesting...l am waiting for the next chapter can quick publisht..hope can cometrue...thanks for the storyline, i like it
this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
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the grammar, English, updates, and character design are good but this story is too close to the original, no altered main events, just some added perspective from a character who usually doesn't affect the main story at all even when he's in the middle of it. no one even questioned a 4 man team in the chunin exam.
Author kiingshet12
the story is almost a direct copy of the manga and by that I mean that there are tons of plot holes and basic history of the Naruto world that are being ignored it baffles me MC wants to bring back uzumaki clan together yet author skips over Karin uzumaki in the chuunin exams the MC is only a side character with a minimal effect on the story, when it's not butchered for authors loopholes all in all its a frustrating read and could have a better execution if only author did his research regarding the world he is trying to portray and MC should have been taught better