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What a rollercoaster ride for my 2nd life, why am i in Central City. I want a anime.
Only Mc is owned by me I do not any other character
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the story is bad and poorly written Xjxjjccjcjfjdjdjdmmddmmdsmmsmsmsmsmzmssmsmmsmzmzmssmsmmzmsmsmsmsmsmsmdmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmdmdmdmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmmsmsmsmsmsmsmskskskskskskskskksksksksksksks
Look I have seen all the other reviews and I mean they are entitled to their own opinions but I enjoy your story and I hope you keep writing because I will keep reading. Also personal preference I want you to use Kizaru more often but I do enjoy watching the MC mess around as Sinbad. I don't have a problem with the genderbending as long as you don't make it weird especially because he is a straight guy ( as far as I know)
this story is just bad and it costs Dhdbfhfnjfjfjfjfjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjcdjdnnxmdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjxjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdkdkkdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdmdkdkdkdkxmdmdkdkdkdkdkdkdjdjddjjxdjdjdjdkxmdmdmdmmddkmmdkdkdkdkdkdmdkddmmddmmxmxmcmdmdmdmdmdmemmddmm
I just think this story is very bad Dhdhdhshjsjsjajamsmsmsjsjsjsjjsjsjdndjdjdjdjdjdndndndndmdndnsmdmxndndndndndndndndndndndnxnxnxndnxnsndnnsnsnsnsnsndndnxnxxxnxnxndnnxnxmmxmzmzmmzmzmxmzmzmzsmmsmsksmssmsmsmmsksmss snsnsnsnsnsm
You have a good thing going on here. Don't listen to the haters who are over exaggerating the bad qualities in your book. You do need to work on small things like grammar and content. Once you become better, it is like telling the haters that you have won and they have lost. Good job so far, don't be discouraged by haters. ๐
this story is really bad โ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธ
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the writing is bad, not horrible but bad.....also the MC's power is basically the omnitrix but instead of aliens all the beings inside are FEMALE anime characters, normally this wouldnt be a problem but the thing is that the MC is an ML....so yah, **** genderbend, delete this and I swear I'll spam