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Spaceship Captain, Marston Jones, is in a horrible situation due to his own stupidity.
A Goddess presents a choice to him. Continue to suffer, then die, or get a new life and, at the end of his new life, suffer forever.
Can he find a third way out of this?
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I have enjoyed writing this so far and have an excellent plan for how to end the book, so I hope whoever reads it enjoys it as well. I moved the first four chapters as Auxillary since the story does a dramatic change in chapter five.
That was very interesting if I have to say. The plot and the first two chapters got me hooked up. Can't wait to read more. The story development was well in pace and the world background was also well described. As for grammar, I can't really comment on it, coz I really don't know many rules of grammar. I think I should thank my cousin(minho) to ask me leave a review for such wonderful book. I will sure follow your work from this minute. Keep up the good work author and I will sure recommend it to my friends.
Marston Jones has quite the bargaining skills, if I may say. Just please give him that Omni Laser 2. I am quite saddened by the fact that Magni's death was quite hurried and not elaborated, I guess? His errand was quite a significant one, so I thought I would be able to read his struggles a bit more. However, I'm not gonna complain further since you've narrated it fairly well. I can't quite get a grasp of Ozen? She serves as a major catalyst to Marston's reincarnation, so in the future, I hope that you can establish her character! Looking forward to it. The setting was a tad novel to me. Thus, I was roped in while reading the 8 chapters. Is the current setting still in the black eye galaxy? Just asking. [If you read this, you're going to get mad at me, so please don't] In terms of the technicalities in the writing itself, I've noticed a lot of misuse and absence of punctuation marks, also capitalizations. I have no qualms on the phrasing. However, properly placed punctations will give your sentences better transitions. For the passages inside the parenthesis, I want to suggest that you take them out. They are related to the topic, so there's no need to enclose them. You can list out related clauses with some semi-colons. Adding to this, the lengthy paragraph regarding the information about the weapons was quite difficult to peruse over. I think that you could put each item in a separate line, instead of condensing them in one paragraph for easier reading. Please be more descriptive with your work, as if you're letting the readers know of the actual picture inside your head. You're doing good with this, just supplement it a little more! Sorry for my lengthy critique. This was not out of spite, but merely constructive. You are a great writer! I'll be cheering you on in the future and let's improve together!
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First of all, I fricking love space and FTL no way I can show hate to this. The writing style is great, the pacing is right and character is likable. Let's hope you will keep the same level of quality. This deserved five stars. I will surely support this series already added to my library. cones => nothing much to say I didn't notice any flaw in grammar and if there is some that I missed it can be fixed using Grammarly or any other grammar fixer.
That was cool... When he destroyed enemy ship. I will for sure Conti reading it till the end. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his hardwork.
Yay!!! I noticed some error here and there but a bit of Grammarly is the answer to that✌✌✌. Story is a bit slow at the start but picked up It's pace later on, don't worry future readers, It's just the start. There's still not much development at the start but like I said, It picked up It's pace👌👌👌. World Background was something like Sci-Fi, Comedic Space Rangers, hahaha, no, just joking. All in all, this is a nice you'v got here, keep up the good work
I like the story, It has a sort of comedy, rogue, space bandit kind of feel to it. The start of the chapter didn't really include some development into the story so it's kinda slow but will definitely read! Would recommend including the other information into the story itself so it could feel more natural and interesting, Instead of explaining it but so far it's really good!
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Hi this is Brandon Gould the writter of Tylingariea Epic i am responding to a review swap that i sent here is my review I have never read a book quite like this. I enjoyed the chapters that i have read. The way that you went into so much detail about the world and the MC and how his life is processing is very interesting. I also like the fusion of sci fi, fantasy and bits of nordic elements it makes for a unique reading experience i can't wait to see more chapters in the future
Really good! I wish I could have such talent do describe the appearance of my characters. I really like the world so far and the characters in it. I'm very interested in how this story will develop.
This is my first time reading a novel related to space and stuff, but so far I am dying to know what happened next! I really love your novel! You have also done a great job with the story line! Good job author!
This novel is great, I am following then novel since I did my first review on this. The story is great the characters the likable and it all moves with a smooth flow. All I have is praise for the writer that wrote such a magnificent and this is my honest review support this novel. We need to keep the writer motivated so he continues to write this great novel.