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I have to say, I kind of got jealous on this book. It's good and interesting, I wish there wasn't an end to it. I liked tehe background and quality, its very grabbing indeed.
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Take your time describing the surroundings and situation, before jumping to the next. I got lost when I read about the chest and the important papers. What are them? Why are they important? Why are they separated?
Not bad, but like someone said earlier it would be better to take your time to describe surroundings before jumping to the next. Will support you