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MonsterCreator

This story is goddamn amazing I hope you don't drop it. I had so much fun reading all the dialogs , Rath is Rath what can I say one of the best novels story wise and best in grammar for quite some time, man pump more chaps be a good chap ok? Tyvm.

LV 10

Marcelinho_Ggazeli

very good, the choice for the main wife is perfect, ororo is a beautiful princess, but I beg you please remove the shoes from the protagonist’s uniform, he is a tiger and cannot wear shoes, the main enemy of the protagonist is his sense of fashion, the guy wears green in his uniform which makes him a mobile target with a sign on his head written "shoot me", in addition to wearing shoes please shoes not

LV 13

BrightCelery

Im loving it bro hope You wright more Cause i canT wait to Keep reading 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳🥳🥳🙂🙃😉😌😌😉🙂

LV 4

ObamaUchiha

someone said it was a harem and i believe him so here i am #AntiHaremSect ..........................................................................................

LV 13

Animelove1

Hahahhahahahahahahahah 😂 luv it I simply just really like this story like able characters and, RATH IS ALWAYS AWESOME!!!! I look forward to reading more

LV 13

colbster303

I'm gonna be honest this story is bad I was excited to read it but right out the gate it went to the generic path. Everything is forced the relationship, friendships don't even get me started on how he presents the story.Its terrible no spacing at all it's jumbled together there's no substance at all.I would love to see the story his interactions but he just explains what happend we don't even get to see it.So yea boring, bland, and cringe just like every other one sad I really was hoping it was gonna be different.

LV 4

DuncanIneau

You should put harem in the tag I'm disappointed of the story because it's a harem and we don't even know.. . Sad the story was good. [img=faceslap]

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Manny_Douriet

This is the greatest story I've had read so far I can't get enough of Rath so no matter what others say this story rocks also I'd add a harem tag to the story so that the anti harem readers leave the story alone.

LV 1

Sheptshept

Es pura mierda la historia no tiene sentido alguno parece una novela de autor novato y ahora sabemos que el autor quiere crear una especie de torneo del poder entre todas sus novelas esta novela no se si vale el tiempo para leerla se salta mucha descripción del personaje y cuesta imaginar la escena en el momento salu2

LV 4

Kevin_Pollard

Now let me tell you something, I can't even comprend how this has a 4.2. anyone who gives this a bad review is just a hater who can't laugh I who am also a part if the noharemsect cant believe the hate this is getting just for harem it's stupid and they didn't even read it and are finding things to complain about cause its just that good.

LV 14

GAMING_IS_MUST

you know what the problem is? he knows he HAS to get stronger marvel world has so many opportunities to get stronger but he is doing NOTHING!!

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Sakkaku_no_mori

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Jashandeep_Sandhu

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Kaito_Uzumaki

If this even got to half as successful as Your Crocodile one, I can die a happy man. I've been looking for a Rath Story and you just made my day

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Jashandeep_Sandhu

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BrownOptometrist

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍

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Lutheris_right

Rath is my best alien in Ben 10, after Alien X of course, so seeing you doing this makes my heart warm in joy. Thank you so very much for having this courage

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Lethal_Drinker

great novel don't drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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HellHound

YEACH RATH!!!!!! YOU MADE A NOVEL FOR RATH!! THAT DESERVES STARS AND YOU WILL GET THEM!! GO RATH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 1

suggestaname

don't drop plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz seriously don't drop love the concept kxnckbnsrizhflkhelifhldxnglkawfljengl.kn