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Author: Piokilek

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Skilled, disciplined and merciless.

Liu Ye was a perfect killing machine for the underworld when he finally decided to step down and live a normal life. All of that for his lovely little sister who was his only family left.

Unfortunately, fate wasn’t on his side.

A forgotten debt forces Liu Ye to return to his past life but this time, in a new role. His Ex-lover, the heiress of the local triad, recruits him for something unusual— a VR Game called Avatar Online.

Elements? Abilities? Avatar?

Follow Liu Ye’s adventure as the world he knew changes upside down!

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    48Reviews

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    Piokilek

    I think this is the best novel I have written so far and I'm inviting everyone to read it. You will not regret and I promise you will get hooked right from the start <3

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    LamenThief

    I'm a simple guy; I see Piokilek as the author's name, I read it. But I don't think I will like any novel more than SC. That was the first novel I read on this site and what motivated me to write too.

    2yr
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    patata
    LV 12 Badge

    One of the most well written LITRPGs among original works! Characters are fleshed out, and world building is steady. The MC is not much of a talker and he has the tendency to act first, think later, causing lots of hilarious situations to happen. Definitely worth a read!

    3yr
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    XPrint

    I don't know about everyone else but personaly I like a game novel to be just that, a game novel. Not a conspiracy about your parents death or otherwise. And come on, do you really expect anyone in their right mind to think of the sister as a 19yr old university student, the personality is of a 6yr old. just a young sis cliche.

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    2yr
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    Proddy
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    I'm only slightly biased because I'm a fan of the author, but I like the novel so far 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

    3yr
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    jstinn
    LV 13 Badge

    Great start! Love the concept and i really look forward to the romance „development“ part. Based on the few chapters i read, the FL is awesome too! Definitely worth a read so far!

    2yr
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    DZsTheOnlyWay

    I love it!!! I wish i could time travel to the future just to read the complete novel without waiting. Keep it up with this one pls author-san!!!

    2yr
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    nd26
    LV 3 Badge

    If Sprit cultivation was a B grage, then Against Heaven's Will was a A+ and this right here Avtar Online is a masterpiece with a rank of S. Seriously cant wait for the future chapters of this novel[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

    2yr
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    Alpadin

    I just binge read the first four chapters without realising. First, the author. I've read/an reading all of his books and one thing I know is that the newer his book the better his writing, story building and character development are. That rule doesn't change here. Characters already have their distinctive personalities. The mc is a cold blooded, definitely not the type to spoil his woman to death. In other words, he's not a simp.

    2yr
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    Jesse_Boyer

    Seems like a good start. It got me hooked already. I am a fan of the author so I may be a tad biased. I hope you stick with this story and that there will be steady updates.

    3yr
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    X_Cibula

    more chapter more chapters more chaptersmore chapters more chapters morr chapter more chapters n d t ds i

    2yr
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    Slider_9536

    This story is amazing so far but new chapters come out too slow to keep the interest of some of those who get to the newest chapters and are waiting for new ones to come out. While I understand that is important to take your time writing to make sure that new chapters are of good quality, the fast release of new chapters is also really important even if you have to shorten the chapter to achieve this. More but smaller chapters of the same quality will help you keep the attention of those readers that are less patient or invested in the story because they will notice a notification for a new chapter more often and keep it at the top of their library each time they open it to read the new chapter. It may also help you Increase your writing quality because you will be focusing on a smaller amount of work at a time.

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    Jorlat123

    Wow, all reviews are 5 stars. Hard to believe it so I'll gonna add this story to my library for now then wait for the chapters to grow into hundreds then read. I really hate when I'm have been left hanging when I'm already so into the story just because there are only few chapters. :D

    2yr
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    FoolishPanda_25

    Great new work, different and new that just got me hooked on 12 chapters. Got to see what happens next in the future and definitly waiting for next chapters daily like other books you have.

    2yr
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    Dayone_Williams

    Can't wait to read more of the book it is very interesting and it has me very anxious to read more and thanks for the chapters so far.

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    Leo_Scheiber_5414

    Honestly you can kinda take this review with a grain of salt because there are so few chapters I cant say anything about stability of updates or world background really, but honestly i'm hooked. The writing quality is really good and so far the characters, irl world, game, and npcs and everything are rly good and well written. The author has also dropped foreshadowing and honestly my imagination is running wild and I can't wait to read more. With only 9 chapters I can't guarantee the novel is good but so far its promising and its 100% worth it to at least try reading it.

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    2yr
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    WhitestShadows

    i usually wait till a series is in full swing before reading as it takes more than a few chapters to cause me to continue reading. this was not the case as I was fully engrossed in the story by the end of chapter 2. would wholeheartedly recommend reading

    2yr
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    Sean_Tay

    its only been 4 chapters but I'm so hooked in the novel right now. maybe author san is one of my fav. ......................................

    2yr
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    Connor_Shipes

    Honestly, I have absolutely loved your other books, so I have no doubts that this is one with insane potential and that you can use all of its potential CORRECTLY. Although I dropped Against Heaven's Will, it was still a great book. I hope you don't drop this like you did Chameleon: My True Face. Also, a petition to please bring back Chameleon: My True Face.

    3yr
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    RackOfLife

    I'm already hooked I can't wait to see where this goes it's an Orginal novel that has gained inspiration from Avatar the Last Airbender I believe and become this VR game. I have high hopes for this and hope this can be released a lot.

    3yr
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