Avatar the last Airbender: 2nd Coming of the Avatar

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JeToNiX

for those who dont like the mc losing theyre memories of past lives of earth . Dont read . if you like an OC with probably amnesia then have fun

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toekanplayZ

i really do not like the super large size text blocks and i think it would read better if the text was better spaced otherwise its a good story

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Playsdown1

It would be nice if the author ne synopsis writes story is OK you could put the text in blocks the it would be easier to read my main language isn't English and it's hard to follow I find myself skimming sentences, because it is hard to read continuously The memory loss isnt my forte I don't like it really much but I hope like in the prologue geteasert that he get his memories beck and becomes a avatar

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mudbloodmk12

it was great but yeah vatu kinda force in the story.

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Arion_Sturmklinge

Great book, i hope you keep it up ‐----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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AstralNinja420

Get better at writing an interesting story not this trash I feel like bleaching my eyes after a few chapters

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Arion_Sturmklinge

great story I hope you don't drop it.

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Antonio_Herrero

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Hsaet_Uchiha

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Arion_Sturmklinge

Still es great as ever