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Really enjoyed this book. The characters are muti dimensional and interesting. reading number two in the series now. looking forward to more of this author's work!
I don't read many stories so I'm still very ignorant, and even if this story is already completed, I just wanna say: This is a masterpiece.
I loved the store the loss the discovery the amazing will of the character and his friends the complete and unstoppable love of the character
I like the story and wants to read more of it. But unfortunately its already completed and we cannot read another new chapter of it. Although I still think it could be longer and more flesh out, but since its a prequel and there are some more other story as the sequel and they are not completed yet, hopefully they could be expanded and interconnected with each other nicely.
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i enjoyed reading this book. the adventures they've been thru together. this book shows how the relationship of friends must be. thru thick and thin. i hope to read another chap or part or even sequel of this story
It was a good read. From begining all characters had a part to play and the development was good. Despite the grammar and spelling that can be overlooked progression was good.
most enjoyable story. keep up the good work. i have been trying to find the one more time- rebirth sequel, but dont seem to be able to do so. i only got onto webnovel a couple of months. if you can provide any info, that will be very much appreciated. thanking you.
Woooooooooooooooooooooooow!!!!! Interesting!!!!!!! Cooooooooooooooooooooooooool!!!!!! Daebaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaak!!!!!!! Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaat!!!!!!!!
The story of the young Leo was an amazing experience for me because of your work I was hoping for you to make another one or continue the series. Please continue your work I hope to see more
Ahmm so. Where can i read the novel after beginnings end. I seem cant search it here in webnovel. By the way nice work on the novels yku created.
A solid if trope-heavy story that accomplishes what it is trying to do. However, it is hampered by formatting and grammatical errors that bring reading to a screeching hault.
I love this novel! After reading this one I am going to search for the next one mentioned in the comments. The world building is awesome, the characters are well done, the backstory to them is well thought out. Good job author.
Thjis is a great story.. That u will love the most.. If u are somewhat like anime lover this story will give you that.. Also the personality of Leonard is "wow"
Really catching story. I am happy i saw it. Thete is no slow plot, on the contrary the story goes really fast but with few loopholes. It keeps you interesting and that it is divided in multiple books is a nice idea. But i have to warn you: many grammar mistakes!! So the best is to just ignore them and move on.
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A great and expansive story that has a huge world to enjoy. You cant be lost in the story and the stories immersive. Keep up the good work 😊
Your work is really wonderful,but update some of them sometimes. Just wanna say this cauz people might get irritated or mad because of long time waiting "this is only my opinion pls keep in mind
This novel is great, I give 5 stars. I really love it, especially the idea changing of point of views. I love the story overall, keep it up author!
Reveal SpoilerAuthor I hope you dont drop out this story 😇😊 ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀
The story got good flow. It is hard not liking it. by now it is totally perfect. please keep up the pace that as the story goes deep. Hope you do the justice to the story
Saw that this story needed one more review to get it's official rating so I read it. The whole thing and I'm giving my honest review currently. I love the story and everything. But there are some problems with the characters in my opinion. They just seem too flat but hey, isn't most of them are. But Other than that this was a good read.
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A dumb mc that can't think. One of those mc that gets toyed around even though enemy wasn't intentional on it. Fufufyvig8tcigtovtchvuvu I'll lgttovottcotcotcifovrrcitvotvtovhrrfurklfitgitvtc9ftu
Reveal SpoilerInteresting book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As a fan of the Author thanks to their other work Adopted soldier, I'm excited to read this~ Woooh support! I am a Fish btw. XD How many more charactere....
I have been reading everything you have on this series. i have loved all of it but am curious what has happened to some of the other works that were listed to Be sequals.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email lise.work2021@gmail.com
Really enjoyed this book. The characters are muti dimensional and interesting. reading number two in the series now. looking forward to more of this author's work!
I don't read many stories so I'm still very ignorant, and even if this story is already completed, I just wanna say: This is a masterpiece.
I loved the store the loss the discovery the amazing will of the character and his friends the complete and unstoppable love of the character
I like the story and wants to read more of it. But unfortunately its already completed and we cannot read another new chapter of it. Although I still think it could be longer and more flesh out, but since its a prequel and there are some more other story as the sequel and they are not completed yet, hopefully they could be expanded and interconnected with each other nicely.
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i enjoyed reading this book. the adventures they've been thru together. this book shows how the relationship of friends must be. thru thick and thin. i hope to read another chap or part or even sequel of this story
It was a good read. From begining all characters had a part to play and the development was good. Despite the grammar and spelling that can be overlooked progression was good.
most enjoyable story. keep up the good work. i have been trying to find the one more time- rebirth sequel, but dont seem to be able to do so. i only got onto webnovel a couple of months. if you can provide any info, that will be very much appreciated. thanking you.
Woooooooooooooooooooooooow!!!!! Interesting!!!!!!! Cooooooooooooooooooooooooool!!!!!! Daebaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaak!!!!!!! Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasaaat!!!!!!!!
The story of the young Leo was an amazing experience for me because of your work I was hoping for you to make another one or continue the series. Please continue your work I hope to see more
Ahmm so. Where can i read the novel after beginnings end. I seem cant search it here in webnovel. By the way nice work on the novels yku created.
A solid if trope-heavy story that accomplishes what it is trying to do. However, it is hampered by formatting and grammatical errors that bring reading to a screeching hault.
I love this novel! After reading this one I am going to search for the next one mentioned in the comments. The world building is awesome, the characters are well done, the backstory to them is well thought out. Good job author.
Thjis is a great story.. That u will love the most.. If u are somewhat like anime lover this story will give you that.. Also the personality of Leonard is "wow"
Really catching story. I am happy i saw it. Thete is no slow plot, on the contrary the story goes really fast but with few loopholes. It keeps you interesting and that it is divided in multiple books is a nice idea. But i have to warn you: many grammar mistakes!! So the best is to just ignore them and move on.
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A great and expansive story that has a huge world to enjoy. You cant be lost in the story and the stories immersive. Keep up the good work 😊
Your work is really wonderful,but update some of them sometimes. Just wanna say this cauz people might get irritated or mad because of long time waiting "this is only my opinion pls keep in mind
This novel is great, I give 5 stars. I really love it, especially the idea changing of point of views. I love the story overall, keep it up author!
Reveal SpoilerAuthor I hope you dont drop out this story 😇😊 ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀
The story got good flow. It is hard not liking it. by now it is totally perfect. please keep up the pace that as the story goes deep. Hope you do the justice to the story
Saw that this story needed one more review to get it's official rating so I read it. The whole thing and I'm giving my honest review currently. I love the story and everything. But there are some problems with the characters in my opinion. They just seem too flat but hey, isn't most of them are. But Other than that this was a good read.
Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?Cover sauce?
A dumb mc that can't think. One of those mc that gets toyed around even though enemy wasn't intentional on it. Fufufyvig8tcigtovtchvuvu I'll lgttovottcotcotcifovrrcitvotvtovhrrfurklfitgitvtc9ftu
Reveal SpoilerInteresting book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As a fan of the Author thanks to their other work Adopted soldier, I'm excited to read this~ Woooh support! I am a Fish btw. XD How many more charactere....
I have been reading everything you have on this series. i have loved all of it but am curious what has happened to some of the other works that were listed to Be sequals.