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[co-writter phantomdemon and becquerl] A retelling of the Ben 10 story with all that entails- cool fights, heroism, world ending threats, magic and freaking aliens! Alongside a more…anime inspired story.
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The story is well done, and although it lacks grammar, it is well written, along with the development of feelings and relationships is not forced, which helps a lot and makes it an excellent read.
The story is pretty good. The writing quality could be better though seeing how your grammer needs some work. However, it's not unbearable like all these translation stories, so you're one upping them in that regard. I also like how mature it is compared to stories that always stick to the childish theme. I love how Ben is a little more mature and smart about how he uses the Omnitrix. Please keep updating the story and please work on your writing author, so it'll be easier to read.