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"Did you come on a cruise?"
-Yes. My father is a merchant seaman and cruise ship captain. He left me here and went back to his job of traveling the world. He can only return every few years. So I will have to make friends as soon as possible. I don't like to walk alone, less in an unknown city
"Would you be my friend, Bierny?"
- Delighted! Princess: KeiSky, an honor to be your guide on land.
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Interesante historia, el autor logra captar la atención del lector con su escritura ya que es una historia cercana y fácil de comprender. Los personajes permiten enlazar muy bien la temática y el mensaje que quiere proyectar.
I have just started reading this story and till now have just read the first chapter but honestly the story plot is realy interesting,the introduction of the mc and the betrayal of his friend everything is unique on its own.Now I am waiting for something magical to happen ,maybe I would see it in chapter 2?
Waoh! Another great story with great imagination from dear friend/author. The synopsis and overall story is amazing. The writing flow has become lot better from before. Waiting for more chapters. All the best. I hope that your story win this contest. 🙂🙂
your story is excellent from the beginning , i can personally say you are very talented and i love the story , the characters are brilliant and it only makes one addicted to it good luck
Great the story keeps on getting interesting with so many new characters getting added. I actually like the protagonist of this story ,he is a lovable son a hard working person and a trustworthy fri end.
Excellent story from the very start. The author has a great writing skill that makes you addicted to the story from the onset and that's not common in many. Brilliant characters and very well written. I recommend this book to everyone on here. Thumbs up to the author for an superb piece of writing.
I feel sorry for the main character and hope all works out in his favor. You have a very professional way with words. Captivating story from the beginning, cant wait to read more chapters. Well written and easy to read. Excellent novel, well done. [img=recommend]
your synopsis put a smile on my face by the way. your way of writing is something i find hard to describe. its big, and intriguing, dragging me in, your use words like you know their power and weight. you have done a great job, well done.
The book itself is a great masterpiece the author hardworked for. Each characters has definite style as well as how the author developed each. Of how he/she creates his/her own world. It's pretty amazing❤❤ Lovelots, Ciieee
Gran trabajo Bernabé. Felicitaciones, conectas con tus historias y personajes, se evidencia tu talento y empeño en lo que haces. Excelente 👌 👏👏👏👏👏
Excelente historia, es un gran trabajo del escritor Bernabé. Se nota el trabajo, empeño y la pasión por la escritura. Felicitaciones 🍷🎊 una gran labor 👏👏
Llevo la primera parte de la historia y ya me envolví con la trama, es un buen comienzo, me gusta la manera en la que se está desarrollando...
The writer is very talented. The story is unique and the characters are lovely. This is one book that every one would fall in love with. Bravo
I thought the introduction was very nice. I don't usually read books like these, but I thought that this one was pretty cool. The author was very descriptive when writing. I didn't catch any grammarical errors from what I read. Overall pretty good!!!!
Me gusta que la historia tiene partes graciosas, el manejo del humor hace que la historia sea más amena de leer. Es importante que el escritor siga manejando el texto de esa forma, con esos detalles importantes.
A medida que sigues leyendo la historia comprendes mucho mejor que es necesario tomar buenas decisiones sin importar las circunstancias. Recomendaría al autor tener en cuenta más los pequeños detalles, las descripciones de los personajes y lugares.
Es una historia atrapante, se evidencia que el escritor le apasiona la escritura, es interesante como inicia su historia y quieres leer más.
Out of all your novels I have read so far. I truly believe that this one has the best writing. (I mean that not overall, but from the very first chapter.) Out of all the first chapters you have written, this one is the best. Glad to see your writing so strong, straight out of the starting gate! Very impressive! Well done, my friend.
Bierny is such a cool character. First of all he was wrongly accused of what he didn't do and then he got out of jail lost of what next to do and reminiscing about the past then he met the glowing American girl 💞 I love it!
This book has an interesting plot. Now an honest review proper after reading up to chapter 31, Writing quality. The author's choice of words was exquisite and poetic which is already a great plus. There are minimal grammatical errors, but nothing much to hinder your reading. There are just some dialogues I found quite confusing along with some changes in point of views, maybe you could stick with a single character pov or third pov. Chapter 9-13 contents are quite similar to chapters 4-8. Stability of updates: No problems on this part. Story development. It starts with Bierny unfortunate life, which already can capture the readers. Then the memory he met Nalexa the love of his life is quite smooth too. Then the addition of an undercover secret agent, parallel world, Aneashy kingdom, Alghalys, set the story to turn for more exciting events and developments. Character Design: I see no problems here since each of the characters is portrayed well. World background: It seems the author has a full grasp of this, from the place details down to some item details, they are written well. Oh and I also love how you put some ecological issues here, which added flavors to your story. Overall this story is quite an interesting read with refreshing ideas. Keep it up, author!
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