Bleach: Achievement (rewrite)

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IINeeRoII

This is Harem, for those who expected this comment or clarification hahahah. The story is not bad, but it does not focus on bleach, it seems more like a multiversal journey, personally I think he left his world very quickly, there is no proper transition of the character, relationships do not develop properly until now (family or friends) , even though you have the opportunity. He doesn't care about his world, that shows, he let the canon events happen and he doesn't get involved at all (I don't know what the author thought but I think he doesn't take into account butterfly effects, or anything similar and if so, it doesn't show in the fic). Note: There are quite a few unedited data dumps.

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Br4tsch

100% recommended Well written Good development funny and a non retard OC what do you want more so go and read this dame FF

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Nandak

You have written some really good fanfics here Never thought I will be giving 5 star review to the same author...............................

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Theonefromhell

Love it…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….*****************************************

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OzymandiasPrime09

Niceeee ヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉヾ(･ω･*)ﾉ

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Griffin138

There are not many bleach fanfics so I hope you will not drop this !! There are not many bleach fanfics so I hope you will not drop this !!

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Nikels_Tm

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Aden_Sky

keep up the good work author san .............................................................................................................................

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Lukas_dark

so far this is great the only thing that could use some work is the spelling but besides that it is almost perfect. words words words words.

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one_punch_op

The story is good and it keeps improving so props to you for being so hard working please don't stop this is going great and I love it. XDXDXD

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Griffin138

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